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Reviews for Washing Away Insecurity

By : RoguishWayfarer
  • From Killerman83ca on September 04, 2007
    You have a good story here. I would like to know what happens with Kelly and Polaski. Does Kelly find out that Polaski was killed on Halo.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2006
    I'd actually like to see more Kelly stories, she seems to be largely missed as a character in fanfiction, especialy her relationship with MC. But, either way, Here you have a great story.
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  • From elegyenigma on December 01, 2006
    ....WOW. Amazing. Usually, I don't really get off on female-female pairings (A guy who doesn't get turned on by lesbian sex scenes, double-you tee eff?!), and this story is no exception...but the plot and the entire tone and skill with which this story was made was just BEAUTIFUL. I love it. 5/5
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  • From ANON - Majin_Amy on November 22, 2006
    Wow, that was a VERY good story and I mean *VERY* good. Its not too often that you see a well-witten yuri story around, especially a Halo story! I would love to see another story with Polaski and John/Locklear (or both, hell that would be good, too!) and a Major Silva story getting it from a twisted Covenant would nice too. Would he be getting his "just desserts" from an Elite? A Hunter would be awesome as well, maybe even a Grunt? O.o;; Now you know I'm pretty twisted when I say 'GRUNT', but hey, you don't see too many fics out there with Grunts. I myself plan on writing an Elite/Grunt story once I get the time...

    Hm, well anyway, I await further fanfictions from you in the near future! Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Benji on November 21, 2006
    Hot stuff! I'm assuming you haven't read Ghosts of Onyx still; it's great! This is a cool little story (no, not just because there's two girls). It's definitely written at a higher level, especially looking at some of the other stuff on here. I can't remember, but it sure sounds like you got all the details right too.
    And yes, hunta, Polaski is dead; they are in heaven. (Hence, "Fort Redemption" and such. Clever!)
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  • From ANON - ze hunta wit ze luva on November 19, 2006
    whoa, this is sooooo hard to get! Is Paloski dead?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2006
    This is really nice!! I really hope you do write a Locklear&Polaski. Polaski's a strong character, and even though Locklers a bit un-level, he's likeable for he does. But yeah great stuff! Do more! :D
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