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Reviews for Together In Our World Alone

By : blackdiamondprincess
  • From PaygeVidette on May 25, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter! I love this story! I really wanna know whats going on with Axel and Roxas and the people trying to kill Riku and Sora but I guess that will be revealed in time cause I know you won't give up on this fantastic story:) Thank you so much for continuing to devote your time to it cause I eagerly await every update!:)
    And please keep Riku and Sora together and give them a happy ending! they're so cute together!

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  • From FayeV on May 24, 2007
    Well! I'm glad to see you decided not to give up on it!!! Awesome! And of course another brilliant chapter. Sad, but brilliant nonetheless. Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Update soon!
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  • From DaughterOfTheDarkness on April 23, 2007
    How could you possibly think that your work 'isn't appealing anymore'?!
    These stories are truly phenomenal. You put an incredible amount of emotion into your writing, and deserve to be praised for it. I've honestly lost count at how many points throughout this series of three stories that I've cried, whether the tears be happy or sad. I've never had such an emotional experience simply from reading before, and I thank you for that. You are a true artist, and I'm extremely thankful that I managed to find your work, which one of the few true gems I've found on this site so far. I'm incredibly envious of your amazing talent, and I can only hope that one day I can become half the writer you are.
    Now that my semi-insane sounding {to me, at least} praising is complete {for now}, let me just say that I cannot wait until the next part of this incredible story to come out. If you didn't continue it, I'm positive I would cry. I truly hope that you continue soon.

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  • From chronoofdarkness on April 03, 2007
    I'm in love with your work. Your style is amazing and your stories are so inviting. I've already got my friends addicted to them. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From MakoLady on March 26, 2007
    And it's the pregnancy, part 2! Let's hope that the sequel turns out better than the original, another tragic accident would be...wel, compelling, actually, but also sad. Very, very sad.

    And I don't know. It seems like Sora's forgiven Riku too easily. Silverboy needs to suffer some more. But you are the author, and I shall trust your vision. Besides, knowing you, everyone's in for some suffering.
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  • From FayeV on March 20, 2007
    Well...I'm sorry that you're discouraged...but just so ya know, I am always waiting for your updates! And a friend of mine, now that I think about it...It truly saddens me to know that you are going to have to trudge your way through this story...And I know it's not your fault, and I always review. So, I guess I'm saying, as a person who usually reviews what she reads, that it kind of goes both ways for me. Now I'll be reading your story, knowing you're not even enjoying your own story, which in turn will sadden me, and affect my enjoyment. You're one of the most talented AU KH authors I've ever seen, and just know I LOVE your stories, and can't wait to see how the story unfolds. I would hate for you to stop it, but at the same time, I'm not sure it would be too enjoyable, if you yourself can't enjoy it...So, for the your, the stories', and the people who love and enjoy your writing's sakes, I hope you get more reviews!

    Hope I helped! ;) fayeS.
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  • From PaygeVidette on March 19, 2007
    OMG!! please don't stop writing!! I love all your work and your by faaaar the best kingdom hearts rikuxsora writer on the entire adult fanfiction network!! all your fans would be so sad if your wonderful KH stories stopped cause your the one of the few writers who provides a realistic view on riku and sora's relationship thats not childish or depressing, and it's really well written! I dont know about everyone else, but I for one am loving this story and can't wait for any and all updates:-) Thanks once again for all your hard work!!
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  • From on March 18, 2007
    hii! i guess you know me already Suzume626^^.
    Loved it! love all of them XD. All your stories are great, don't stop writting! T_T it'd be a major break down to all your fans. We all know you make it up with the story later on, like you've done with the other ones which there wasn't any problems with. I also wanted to be first one to review the forth story you've made here, I started reading it exactly when you told me you uploaded it X3.
    Well, see you later if you make the next chapters. Bye~ ^^
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  • From kurayamitenshi on March 14, 2007
    Hello! I have read and enjoyed this whole series of stories up to this point. AFF used to let me review without actually having an account, so I've reviewed that way in the past, but now it won't... So... I set up an account just so I could review your story. (^_~)

    I started reading your fanfiction with "Welcome to the Wonderful World of Puberty," and you've had me hooked since then. I was abroad last semester, so I didn't have time to read much of anything, but now that I'm back home I found "Together In Our World Alone." Your stories are always so interesting! I love your characterization and you always keep me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next. I have to admit, I was a bit skeptical initially about the interactions with Roxas, but you've always pulled things together beautifully in the past, so I'm just going to have to wait and see how everything turns out. (^_^) Please update when you get a chance!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2006
    I just would like to say that you're doing great with this! Don't listen to what other people say! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tamika on December 12, 2006
    It really IS a shame that some people don't know when to SHUT UP! Jeez, can't you like delete that review BDP, it's like so denigrating to the wonderful work you've created. Makes me so mad, cuz you're a great author and I just don't understand why you don't get reviews for this! Well, I can actually: people are just jealous... that must be it... hmmm, sore losers.
    Anyway, I looooved this chapter! Go, go Sora! I'm so proud of you! Show him who's boss! Hehehe... and I liked the suspense that is beginning to build, ooohhh... I just know it's going to be good.
    So, my dear B-D-P, keep it up and don't pay attention to those haters out there! You're doing a marvelous job! (You're the best author on this section of the site!)

    -Tamika
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  • From ANON - Fallen To the Slashy Side on December 05, 2006
    Eh? Surveillance? What are you up to BDP? And Why do I get the impression I'm gonna love every second of it?
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  • From ANON - InuLover147 on December 05, 2006
    i've been looking everyday for like the past week to see if u updated and YAY for today!!... i didn't know what was going in the begining but then i was like ohhhh ok and then the cops(?) omg whats going to happen ahhhh ::wants to know:: ANYWAY good update and update soOOooon
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  • From ANON - fayeS. on December 05, 2006
    Hmmm...Interesting...yeah it's sad they can't get married, but they don't have anything to prove! And those agent guys or whoever they are are creeping me the heck out!! OMG with that car following Sora? I literally squeaked in terror! I was like OMG!! Great update! Update soooonnnn!!!!=)
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 04, 2006
    Okay, first off, screw all those people who send in pathetic reviews and flames, your story is WAY to good to have to deal with that crap. Second, the latest twists and turns this story has taken have been amazing, and i am proud to say that i have read every single chapter to all your stories here more than once and they are all terrific (haven't heard ANYONE say terrific in the longest time)
    Keep up the "terrific" work.
    By the way, if you ever find a tiny bit of extra time on your hands that you don't need to put into your story, than please visit the site Fan Fiction.net and maybe, if you even want to get that far, read and review my story. I would be real honored. The story's called Cardcaptor Kairi: Chronicles of the Midnight Sun. Thanks
    Update soon please and keep up the good work! :)
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