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Reviews for The Warlock of Felwood

By : Vaithen
  • From Fawnheart on May 09, 2008
    Bugga, I have passed over this story so many times it's not funny, thinking that I had already read it but it wasn't this one I had read, it was another one about a warlock and a nightelf. Glad I figured it out because this one is just magic. I read your other story, the one about the house of sunstrider but it didn't grab me as much as this one did, but that's not to say that it isn't a good or well written story. After thinking about it, I sort of came to the conclusion that the reason it didn't grab me the way this one has, is because of the way the pally treated the princess in the other one was really harsh and cold hearted, and like, completely betrayed the person he had supposed to have been protecting, and what's more, seemed to have hated her for a long time before hand; and while the warlock in this one is pretty cold, and nasty he still does these nice little gestures like wrapping her up in his robe so she doesn't get cold and massaging her back in the pond...things like that. He is far less heartless and deliberately cruel and that seems to have left me hopeful throughout it that dey would fall in lurve hehe. Anyway, this is such a good story, you are seriously a brilliant writer. I love the way you used words to form pictures that I can so easily visualise in my mind. I hope you keep going with both of your stories, I want to see if the blood elf softens in the other one dagnabbit, or if the princess gets it together enough to gut him! More than anything though, I just love reading about Mooni and your warlock. Just beautiful! Seriously.
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  • From Rizzoss on July 16, 2007
    one of the best stores i have ever read!! update soon!!
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  • From AzureBonds on May 09, 2007
    Awesome chapter. Can't wait for chapter 4.
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  • From Fatality on April 21, 2007
    I love this! You totally rock! Please write more soon!
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  • From sokeri on February 01, 2007
    Simply amazing.
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  • From sokeri on January 30, 2007
    My god.. I dont think I have been more turned on in my whole life... what server do you play on?

    Thanks alot now I am searching for a warlock on my server to treat me like this ... *sighs*
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  • From ANON - kojivsleo on December 29, 2006
    luck bastard!
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  • From ANON - Jadi on December 26, 2006
    Nooooo! Don't stop it there! Ack! Need more!
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  • From ANON - M.R.B. on December 23, 2006
    Update.
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 20, 2006
    Yes, me again. ^^ Go Mooni! You molest that warlock! O_O
    Hehe, anyway. I'm really anxious to know what Vaithen has planned. *scratches chin* Oh, a little side note... I did like the scene where Vaithen snuck up behind her, and raised her head to look at him. However, night elves are about 7 feet tall... though it doesn't seem probable he'd be able to actually raise her head to look into her eyes, I could still see it happening. Ok, I'll stop babbling about a minor technicality. You! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next! *bows*
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  • From ANON - The PD on December 20, 2006
    Oh my, what a wonderful new chapter!
    Warlocky magic is the shit when it comes to anything not in-game! :D:D:D

    Write more, I am eager too see what happens at the warlock/satyr convention... Orgy? Passing around their girls? O my this shall be fun to read!
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on December 19, 2006
    this is good plz continue
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  • From AzureBonds on December 19, 2006
    More please... This is getting really good ^_^
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  • From ANON - sina on December 15, 2006
    wow you really have to update this!!!!!!!!
    I wonder what will happen to her
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 25, 2006
    Well... I'm having some mixed feelings. I DO like the story for the most part, and the way it is written. Vaithen makes a great dominant character, I love the way he talks and uses his words to control Mooni. However, the only thing that I ~personally~ found odd was that Mooni was a virgin, and somehow manages to enjoy the forced sex. I know you hinted at her enjoying it despite this, and that she was denying her feelings and all, but it just seems to be a bit strange that a female would get her virginity taken from her (rather forcefully as well), bleeds from her nethers, and still likes it. Again, this is just a personal thing, coming from having read too many anatomically inaccurate stories. However! Yours is ten times more accurate than most stories I have read here, so kudos to that! In the end, I am looking forward to more chapters, and I do look to seeing Mooni receive some pleasure. :) (I mean, the kind where she is not trying to deny herself, hehe)
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