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Reviews for Deciding Factor

By : firewolf
  • From burekdober on March 21, 2010
    really good luv Leon+Monsters
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  • From slouchingtyger on April 13, 2009
    Hmm... where to start. Love the Tyrants' point of view, especially how they call the humans 'little bosses' and 'little masters.'

    I've read some of your other stuff, and I love how you characterize Krauser, and I love even more how you write Krauser/Leon, I can definitely say I'm a fan of this pairing now thanks to you.

    The gang rape theme is at times a little much for me to take but I know I can always quit reading. The fact that I never do speaks volumes for your writing. I do feel so bad for poor Leon though.
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  • From decadence9nin9 on May 18, 2007
    arrghhh!!!

    why can't more people write more krauser/leon fiction... this is an exceptional example, and i would definitely want to be hearing more of these from you, my man...

    anyway...yep... keep up the great writing...
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  • From on April 18, 2007
    Such an amazing story..!

    Poor Leon, but I loved how everything is resolved in the ending, no doubt about it.

    I really love how your stories have so many Jack/Leon. I've never considered them as a couple until I've read your stories.

    You are truly an awesome writer and this story makes me a Jack/Leon fan now.

    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Monkey_Man on December 11, 2006
    Wow...that was a great fanfic...I love how you connected the story. I really enjoyed reading it. It was probably one of the few fanfics that I didn't get bored reading. Kudos to you ^^
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  • From ANON - anon on December 04, 2006
    wow lots of people like to write the B.O.W.S. with leon doing it. I saw another rape fic like this but yours is the first and better but your characterizations are off. I think it still works for this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2006
    I believe your Leon characterization was fine, however the Jack portrayal is OOC just as the reviewer above said.
    Still the notion of the Tyrants and the rape was interesting. Very original.
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  • From ANON - Sandraccoon on November 23, 2006
    great story!!!!!!!!! Made me cry!


    :'(


    POOR LEON.

    JACK WAS OOC BUT IN A GOOD WAY.

    WRITE ANOTHER!
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  • From ANON - Mikie on November 22, 2006
    Nice work but you have some repetitive words that you didnt need.
    Overall, the idea of Tyrants and Leon rape isn't original but the way you write it is original.

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  • From ANON - Ennya on November 22, 2006
    Ah, at last - a story to quench my Leon/Jack thirst. Splendidly well written and exciting to the very end. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Luis on November 21, 2006
    Wow that was a long read of non consensual sex between the B.O.W.S. and Leon.

    The Tyrants x Leon pairings were my favorites.
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  • From ANON - anon on November 19, 2006
    holy hell in a plaga room infested tyrant jack and leon love. that was one long ass chapter and i loved it. hehehe, jack and leon sitting on a tree, leon loving jack, and jack a chick magnet. that is very true as jack's big puffy muscles attract the ladies.
    leon getting his ass satueed' and served. hehehhee, love it.
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