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Reviews for Be my Bad Boy

By : mech
  • From ANON - MaddiChan on December 28, 2006
    Your story is a good read but I can't help but find myself confused most of the time. Oh well. Great M/M, keep it coming! One mistake though: Sonic seemed to know Shadow's name at the beginning of the third chapter when before hand, he'd never mentioned it, which seemed to indicate that he didn't know it.
    Though I do wonder: how did Shadow know Sonic's name? And is Tails doing the same thing Sonic is? Questions, questions...
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  • From ANON - The Laughing Man on December 27, 2006
    Thank God for this chapter, because last chapter ( I forgot to mention), I felt that Shadow was being shown as less of a bad boy. On a different note, i actually like this chapter. It is long, it covers your tracks fairly well, though the cover can be seen as a little flimsy in some aspects. The over all idea of this story is wrapped well, but I wonder, are you going to end this so soon? Ha HA! I wonder, I wonder....

    Courtesy of,

    The Laughing Man

    (I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes)
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  • From ANON - some weirdo on December 23, 2006
    I definitely appreciated Chapter 2. I'm happy you knew when to slow down the pace to allow a deeper plot to enter the story instead of making it an incessant sex scene with different partners.

    The idea of Sonic being a painter is really nice. I can see Tails going crazy later and burning them when he discovers Sonic's affair. *ponders*
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  • From ANON - some weirdo on December 23, 2006
    Sorry for delaying the review of this. I'll try hard not to put something off so long again.

    That being said, let's dig in. As always, there were some spelling errors and weird comma use. However, knowing your usual errors, the spelling and grammar is getting better.

    The sex in this story was passionate and well-written. It was really imaginative with the cock ring and the leashes being distinctly kinky. Though in a few patches you fell into the cliche, for the the most part you used a lot of interesting juxtapositions and contrasts of images such as the white cum in Shadow's black fur.

    Overall, I liked this sexy sadistic story.
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  • From ANON - The Laughing Man on December 21, 2006
    Okay, I like this chapter, but something is missing. I am not sure what, but I would have added more. I enjoyed the detail of painting the artwork, it gave me a sense like I was painging it. Although, I don't think the order, or how the painting action was done is accurate, but the writing was poetic enough. I might have expanded this into more than one chapter also, and put more before the painting, more after, and have Tails seeing the painting be the end. Nevertheless, not a bad follow up, just could have been better, 4/5.

    Courtesy of,

    The Laughing Man
    (I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes.)
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  • From ANON - The Laughing Man on December 19, 2006
    Oh my GOD!
    This is the best Sonadow I have read, well, except that one on Sonadow.com, but never mind that. This is a terrific story, and you had several typos. First, you used "too" instead of "to" and then mad instead made. However this is still a great story. I think the story itself outweighs the errors, so I award a 5/5 stars, good job!

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    The Laughing Man

    PS Are you going to continue!?
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