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Reviews for "Adventure"

By : HondoOokami
  • From CatAthem on November 08, 2012
    I really like your Zelda stories. I hope there'll be a chapter with Agitha as well?
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  • From kyubiman on July 09, 2009
    Kinky. So Rusle doesn't expect anything huh? odd...
    You mention that you thought Beth was only 8, well she is actuall 10 or 11, I have the game guide so i know, and i would like to see her get some.
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  • From ANON - ewqrft5ju3htgvfrxd on July 11, 2008
    awesome I luvs it



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  • From kerrde06 on January 01, 2008
    Just read all three chapters and found them to be very well written, I hope you do not give up on this fic. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - flame13th too lazy to log in on July 23, 2007
    Nice one. I wish you keep this stories updated.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on March 05, 2007
    I hope you keep up with this story...it's good and has the potential for quite a number of girls to star in it, heh. Maybe Link will demand a little more from Agitha than a wallet for that last golden bug, eh? XD
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  • From HealerAriel on January 18, 2007
    *blushes and giggles like a schoolgirl* My, our little hero is quite the village bicycle, isn't he?
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  • From dandan on January 17, 2007
    nce again, it was pretty good X3 Loved the mood of the whole thing, especially the begining. Very detailed and stuffs "nodnod" as always, da smex scenes were great, variety ish always a good stuff, glad to see you don't repeat what you already did (not saying it'd be bad, just saying variety ish good X3)

    and the last part was pure comedy X3 you really got Midna's personality right XD

    and yay! you may write one with mah suggestion X3 hee hee, Link tricking a poor innocent girl into thinking they are lovers? That's baaaad X3
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  • From dandan on January 15, 2007
    oh yeh, I forgot.

    "ahem"

    never thought somebody would use Uli for some good anal smex X3 good one! XD

    Also, for Rutela, how about her entering Link's dreams or something.
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  • From dandan on January 15, 2007
    DX that was so wrong! She was just a- who I'm kidding, this was pretty good! XD
    The "Wrong doing the Wild thing" just cracked me up so much XD good one "nodnod"

    I liked the way you showed the whole thing, and I liked Luda's "dispossition" (or whatever you call/spell it) after riding Link. poor girl, totally drained. Rough Link was great >3

    Now, here's a lil help for ya. The three girls of the Castle Town are named Kili, Hanna and Misha (red, blue and green I think). Hope that helps for future chaptie. It's gonna be interesting seeing what you pull off with those three >3

    Oh, and now that I talked about future chapties. You know, Luda should appear a second time for a threesome along with Beth. After helping Ilia and Telma bring Ralis to Kakariko, you have the perfect excuse, I mean, oportunity to put Link banging these two. I'm sure Luda would boast with Beth about her night of fun X3

    and once again, talking about future chapties. Human Link + Midna = wow O.o;;;; Link's tool is probably half of Midna's size XD That's gonna be quite a challenge. For Midna, that is X3

    and once again, and again about future chapties. For the Iza-Hena chapty, you could always add in the Zora girl who helps in the boat game, I mean, she works for them, no? Heck, you could always use one of the weak and helpless Zoras that you find after releasing Lanayru. I mean, they are already in position of taking some Link..... ok, that was lame, sorry.

    Oh, and Ashei? Is the girl gonna get some luff? D= .............. something tells me she'd preffer girls, though >>;;;;;

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    that's ok, that was all I had to say.... well, uh, update soon! or whenever you want! DX

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    long review, no? X3
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  • From Streti on January 15, 2007
    Nice story! Now it at least seems there will be plenty of chances for new Links in the coming generations... It's interesting to see how many people have thought of the Link/Uli pairing, I guess it is pretty strongly implied in the game. What I didn't think of was the shaman's daughter... actually, I thought she/he was a boy, and I'm still not sure. But despite this, Chap 2 was well written and a hot read. The Midna interaction in Chap 2 was funny and true to her character at the same time. Also, I definitely second (third, fourth?) the suggestion for Ashei if you're so inclined, she's cute and sexy in a standout way. Lastly, I'd like to see more cumshots and more details about them and dripping creampies and so on, but I guess you already know this if you've read any of my stories. :P
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  • From ANON - Leigh on January 14, 2007
    I read chapter 2 and i gotta be honest... it was a big let down, I felt so dissapointed. I loved the Link/Uli parts... I was even hoping for some Link/Ilia in the next... but Luda... dude, that chick is ugly... couldn't you have at least made it Beth... or even Midna ? But Luda... not cool, man... not cool.
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  • From ANON - linkage on January 13, 2007
    I love this story so far, you're doing a really good job! Hope you write more soon!
    You should do one with Beth! It's pretty obvious she has a crush on Link! Also, why not Telma? She's always winking at Link and seems to be kind of flirty with him.

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  • From ANON - Omega13 on January 12, 2007
    Good to hear that this will be going somewhere and I would have never thought of using the Shaman's daughter.

    Although I cannot recall her name, what about that chick in armor that gives you your tips in the mountains. The only female member of that swordsman's secret society that meets in Telma's bar. Considering that no-nonsense attitude, perhaps she would be one for Link to target, or if not, at least mention the sting of the cold shoulder after all his previous encounters.
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  • From HondoOokami on January 12, 2007
    Oo, hello everyone! Thanks for the reviews.

    When I listed the pairings, I completley forgot about some of them...so i will do a Ilia solo w/Link in maybe a couple of chapters time, and a short Ashei chapter (thanks to reviewer sr, I DID forget who she was). Because in the game Link only meets Zelda once in his human form (I'm not going to do anything with wolf link) I'm leaving her to the end.

    Ta very much!
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