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Reviews for Double Standard

By : PyramidHead316
  • From ANON - Dahlia's Bitch on January 09, 2007
    Oh yeah, Maria is badass! I like how you protrayed Mary as protective to James instead of just punishing him like in some fics I have read.
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  • From ANON - Maiafay on January 01, 2007
    Nice pairing and interesting situation. I may not be overly fond of femslash, but there is something about forced play that transcends my preferences...whether it be male or female, male/male, or female/female. You stayed in character pretty much throughout, and left things open for another chapter. Always good. It would be interesting if you wrote a threesome with James, Maria and Mary...haven't seen that anywhere. (Or maybe I'm not looking in the right place...lol.) Something to keep in mind. The only big nitpick is the fact you tell and show sometimes...which a little too much. I believe my email will explain it better...but sometimes you reiterate what the reader should already know, or actually doesn't care that much about...if you need a better explanation...email me.

    Other than that, the tale was enjoyable for someone who normally doesn't read femslash...and that should say something...;)
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