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Reviews for Dances of Denial

By : TehAmeh
  • From Vaed on April 12, 2007
    Haha... Sora is such a cute little whore.
    Short, but sweet, as always

    Can't wait for more :)
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  • From HappyDragon on April 11, 2007
    ::Reads chapter.::

    ::Eats chapter.::

    ::Grins.::

    You keep writing, I’ll keep reading. But if you can, get a beta/proofreader. Other than that, I think this is an interesting character study. I almost wish I could read the original version you had for this--with your OCs. However, what you have here is a very nice patch job. The characters feel . . . . right in the roles they’re playing.

    Well, keep up the good work!
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  • From on April 11, 2007
    I hope "great" isn't insulting, but I really did enjoy this story. And "great" doesn't quite describe how much I do like it, but anyhoo, please write more!
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  • From HappyDragon on April 06, 2007
    Please write more for this?
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  • From teeta on March 27, 2007
    The second chappie was great as well! And I couldn't wait to read it, you kept me here waiting ...

    Anyway ... th lap dance was awesome ^__^ Sora was shameless and Riku was ... up? Hehe, yes, he was. But it's not enough for the both of them, I mean Riku - he will come back for more because Kairi is just not enough, not after he discovered Sora. And Sora ... he will finally ask himself if it is worth the money. He surely needs it, the money, that's why he is working as a dancer in a gay club, but ... he is going to hate it, right? Or maybe not. I wonder if Riku will be enough for him ...

    An interesting chappie and I definitely want to read more.
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  • From puccachu on March 26, 2007
    P.S.
    thank yooh for da hmm...
    licious buttcheeks to~
    it's well granted lol
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  • From puccachu on March 26, 2007
    aww~
    dat was hott~
    i love it
    glad your chapters are long~
    or else it would've lost my interest~
    but i haven't lost interest yet!
    keep it up!
    i'll keep yooh updated as you go on to!!
    oxoxox
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  • From sasunaru69 on February 06, 2007
    that´s a cool beginning ^^
    please write another chapter *puppydogeyes*

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  • From NightKeybearer on January 29, 2007
    You've got to write more!!! I know it's hard to update sometimes, we all have lives but you seriously have to continue a story as good as this one.
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  • From ANON - Role Reversal Fan on January 11, 2007
    Holy Shit... This Is Sooo Good. Go Write More Right Now.
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  • From ANON - teeta on January 10, 2007
    Well ... this is my second KH fic and I really don't know the characters all that well. I know what they look like and I would recognize both Riku and Sora (it was impossible last Sunday, lol). So I think I have a fresh view on your story and I am as objective as you could get. Story really seems interesting ^_^ Keep it up, I will be chacking it every once in a while. And good luck with your work on the story.
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  • From ANON - Arie Date on January 10, 2007
    Oh yeah. By the way my e-mail address is yaoi_fan1989@yahoo.com is you do end up wanting to talk to me.
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  • From ANON - Arie Date on January 10, 2007
    I'll beta for you. I always have way to much time on my hands, and it is my job. Beta, editor, same thing. I also had several ideas pop into my head while reading this. Suprising you don't have more reveiws for this. Please kkep writing more of this. Please don't let this be a 'one-shot wonder'!
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  • From ANON - anonymousforsafety on January 08, 2007
    I LOVE IT. No other words needed.
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  • From ANON - Chikara on January 07, 2007
    I like it! It was cute and it made me giggle X3
    -gigglesnort-

    Write more please!!
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