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Reviews for Vaida's Harem

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2009
    Wooooow. This story is awesome. I loved it so much. I may not really be into yuri, but the story aspect itself was worth it, and I love Vaida. This fic is probably one of the only AFF stories I've actually read all the way through. 10/10, good sir/madam.
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  • From ANON - MagicalFish on October 21, 2008
    I don't like Yuri at all, but I read this anyway because it's so well done. Good job.
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  • From SaraJaye on October 10, 2008
    Nice closing!
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  • From SaraJaye on October 10, 2008
    Eeee, I've been waiting so long for the next installment. *hearts* This was a beautiful chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on July 30, 2008
    You're very much welcome. now if memory serves the only girls left to join Vaida's Valkaries, spelling maybe off, are Ninian and Nino. Now remember that if Ninian isn't marrying Eliwood then Ninian is dead. But then again this is your story and if you want, you can take an artistic license with it, but use some sort of believablity. God Speed! Ah, Almost forgot, Nino will probrably more suited to a threesome enviorment to help her learn the ways of the Horizontal Hoedown.
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  • From ANON - Sara, not logged in on July 29, 2008
    Hahaha, Rebecca was very cute here. XD And you're welcome. Always glad to lend a helping hand. :3
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  • From Psychophant on July 23, 2008
    I have to say, this was very well written. I've followed it for some time but only recently created an account. It's impressive alone that you've kept everyone as in-character as you have, but also to have made an eroge fanfiction with a plot. Regarding the issue with Rebecca, I'm actually a fan of Nino/Rebecca pairings, since it seems they spend time together based on their support conversations. To put Vaida with Rebecca, the only plausible idea I have is that Rebecca wanders off hunting and by some manner or other, Vaida either stumbles across her or gets relegated to go and find her. Also, sorry to ask this here, but I'd enjoy a chance to write with you. If you'd like, drop me an email or something - I use most available instant messengers.
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  • From ANON - Sara, not logged in on July 16, 2008
    Hmm...maybe for the Rebecca chapter, you could have her approach Louise only to end up in a threesome with her and Vaida? That's all I can think of.

    Anyway, I liked this chapter. :D It's good to see you up and at it again.
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  • From ANON - kitsune on July 13, 2008
    don't worry Wonton. unfortunately there one of the problems that lie is that Rebecca doesn't have many girl suppports that are easy to obtain. but try searching for one. it might provide some information
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  • From ANON - Zaiaku on March 08, 2008
    Very well written, the fact that each piece of smut actually has a reason behind it to actually not be just written porn, but an erotic story with some sembilience of plot. Though I feel dissappointed that your attention span is not great enough to continuously write the story, I have great pleasure in waiting any updates at any time you wish.
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  • From Fawnheart on November 19, 2007
    Hot...im going to buy this game now ...
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  • From SaraJaye on September 25, 2007
    Hot.
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  • From ANON - Sara Jaye, not logged in on August 16, 2007
    This just may have been my favorite chapter so far. Loved your characterization of Serra.
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  • From Streti on August 16, 2007
    Oh my, a new chapter! The image of Serra in her rain-drenched, see-through robe was quite sexy. Was almost expecting her to whip out a TransGender staff, though. Also, can't help wondering about what exactly the others are doing in the church...
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  • From KuraiD on July 20, 2007
    I would adore to see if you can pull off Ninian, if possible, though admittedly, it will be more for the challenge aspect than the actual "hot" factor... It might be interesting to see it pulled off.

    Otherwise, this whole thing is awesome. >_>b Props for mastering so the FE Yuridom.
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