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Reviews for Midnight Rendezvous

By : SaraJaye
  • From SaraJaye on February 03, 2007
    "One little nitpick: the text says that the girls come 'a fourth and final time'. That should be three (or third). Also, that third time could use a bit more padding, some more description."

    Ahaha, that was an oversight on my part. I originally had the sex scene longer, 4 orgasms each, but I shortened it a bit and changed it to 3. Must've forgotten to change that!

    Yeah, I think my creative juice ran down by then...I'm very unused to writing smut. I clearly need more practice.

    Thanks for your review!
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  • From WotanAnubis on February 02, 2007
    Short, sweet, smutty and practically canon too. What more needs to be said? If anything, perhaps you could have put a bit more focus on the sneaking because now they're just a few mentions at the edges of the girl/girl smut.

    One little nitpick: the text says that the girls come 'a fourth and final time'. That should be three (or third). Also, that third time could use a bit more padding, some more description.

    But anyways: Hurrah for Lyn/Florina smut! May there be much more in the future. ;)
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