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Reviews for A Match for the Mandalore

By : LoreleiJ
  • From ANON - warloc5184 on May 19, 2008
    wow amazing story i do hope u continue this
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 23, 2007
    I started reading this story back during the summer, but I've only now gotten around to reviewing. I have fallen in love with Jennet and Canderous as I've read this story. Whether they're fighting, making love, or just going about their insane lives, those two keep me at the edge of my seat and wondering what will happen next. Your writing is superb, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Warlock5184 on November 25, 2007
    Great story and character build, the polt twist and turn are of all types both important and funny. Cant wait to see where this story goes. :)
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  • From ANON - vgjunky on November 25, 2007
    Wow. Basically sums up what I have to say. I was totally blown away by this and I admittedly passed over reading it at first because the concept was over the top and unfamiliar. Now I know better. One of the hardest things that a writer can do is create engaging characters and situations... and I found myself legitimately concerned about their wellbeing. Great job, and just know that this fickle will ve my primary motive for checking into this site.
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  • From LoreleiJ on October 01, 2007
    Hi there! I just wanted to thank you three for your lovely comments. I adored writing this fic and promise you'll get it in its entirety eventually. Canderous and Jennet are my favorite couple. If you're interested in reading a slightly toned down version (meaning the sex scenes are less graphic) I've posted the whole thing on Fanfiction.net under the same author's name and story title. I chose to start posting it here because I could publish it as I originally wrote it. Canderous is Mandalorian; the sex to my mind would more often than not be wilder and more intense than I can get away with there, even with a "mature" rating. Not to say that it was ALWAYS hot, pummel-each-other-black-and-blue monkey sex, but you get the drift. What I more often that not ended up doing was writing a scene the way I thought it should be, then going over it and modifying certain, er, wording to keep to the nature of the site. I still like the PG13 way a lot, but prefer the steamier version.

    I would also like to apologize for not commenting or thanking you sooner for your reviews. I wish there was a way to directly communicate with reviewers (that's one thing Fanfiction.net has over this site) and didn't think to simply add my own "review" until I saw someone else do just that in reply to comments on their story. So...THANK YOU so much for taking the time to read my story (and believe me, I know how long it takes to read it. As a warning, I'll say that it gets long. Really long. Like 577 pages in Word long. I suffer from an overactive imagination and Jennet is a bloody chatterbox. Wonder where she got that?) AND for taking the time to comment. I enjoy feedback of all sorts, and really appreciate it.

    I thought, if you all ever get around to reading this comment, that you might find it interesting how I came up with the idea in the first place. I was watching the movie Serenity for the umpteenth time and had recently finished playing KOTOR 2 for the first time (right on the heels of KOTOR 1, which I thought was one of the best video games I'd ever come across). As I was watching the scene where River (all of 90lbs and insane to boot) decimates the bar, I was struck with the idea...what would Canderous think if he saw some tiny little woman wipe out a bar full of mercs? Even if he was one of the targets, he'd probably fall in love. Or at least serious lust. So I wrote that scene, and it was all in third person, and it came out great. Then I tried to write the next scene from Jennet's point of view in third person and I couldn't make it work. I cursed a bit and stared and reread and cursed some more and deleted and rewrote and was about to just give it up when Jennet spoke up and said, hey, this is my story, just let me tell it. So I wrote her scene in first person, and Jennet just took over. I went back, rewrote Canderous in first person (he was a little slower to get into that, but eventually got comfortable and talked just fine) and after that, it was almost editing, rather than writing...the pair of them just told me what was going on in their heads and I wrote it down.

    So, thanks guys for your comments. I hope as I post you keep reading and enjoying it and I'd love to hear what you think!

    Always, LJ
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  • From ANON - Jacen on September 14, 2007
    I waited untail i read the whole story before reveiwing, must say this is one of the best fanfiction i have read in a long time, i so hope that you continue to bless us with your writing talent.
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  • From ANON - Nav on August 23, 2007
    Wow! I would have to say that this is one of the best fics that I have read in a long time. Not only is the characterization finominal but it fits nicely with the Game story line.
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  • From BoomBoom on April 11, 2007
    Now, I've only read the first chapter, and may I say I love it! It's so nice to see a non-PWP story here. Your writing is strong, and for that kudos to you! I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet --hence my reasons for reviewing after the first chapter-- I will continue reading on and hope you will finish this fic, if you have not already done so.

    -Boom Boom
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