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Reviews for Tomb Raider: The Fat Man Chronicles

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2015
    ... the more of stone is united, the MORE powerful it becomes. Guess you forgot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2015
    Slapping is the key? To bad no one told Everest, Gordo, all the trouble with blackmail. Do you even know what you're writting anymore?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2015
    Fapulicious. Let the man tell his amazing, hot, erotic, story. Chill with the hysterics kiddies - it's a fucking, bdsm, rape story. But it has a good story arch, and ending planned. Sorry but I like this character, and want her free of this shit that I am loving reading her go through. I think it could be toned down a bit, but I'm not the author, and I kind of trust that she needed to be slapped 50,000,000 times... or maybe not. But like I said - not my call. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2015
    What did I say. Same old tired shit. Hanson=Godo. Lame ass, unoriginal shit.
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  • From VFSNAKE on July 03, 2015
    Nice! Lara got tamed big time.
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  • From VFSNAKE on June 30, 2015
    Nice! Interesting way for the antechamber to open. Should be even more interesting what the other two hold.
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  • From VFSNAKE on June 29, 2015
    Not bad. Good little filling chapter before more sexual goodness.
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  • From modeac on June 17, 2015
    Chapter 35 review;
    Torture scene at beginning was effective and an interesting change of pace.
    Interesting subplot with the thumbdrive although it seems to me they were taking a risk with Lara’s and by extension the evil organisations, activities.
    I like the character of Kitty, she comes across as a mix of playfulness and sadistic intellect. Any chapter with her in is an automatic highlight.
    On a related note who was the other leather clad woman Lara was with in chapter 34 (when Amelia made her recite the ‘statements’)?
    I was impressed with the false backstory Kitty made up; it mixed lesser used canon backstory with lies and halftruths and made very effective ‘character assassination’ of Lara as far as Mark is concerned. The tale itself was strangely arousing as well.
    The first sex scene was well done, you stayed to an external viewpoint well here and the use of the ‘lines’ Lara was tricked/forced to say last chapter worked well to spice things up and move the plot along as far as Mark was concerned.
    The ‘next scheduled session’ and ‘list of requests’ Kitty spoke of has me excited.
    Questions;
    What did Kitty mean by calling Lara ‘a former long time patron’? The phrasing stuck with me.
    I’d be really interested in seeing a list of the things on the thumb drive, I imagine it would include things not shown in the story in general (maybe ideas that didn’t fit in the story but were still great) and canon stuff like the humiliating tasks for Gordo shown from a different angle.

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  • From s-incubus on April 11, 2015
    Glad you're back continuing the story again. And good to see Lara taking control now and then ;)
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  • From VFSNAKE on April 07, 2015
    Nice! Lara is in real trouble now. HA!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2015
    I want to hate this. I really do. But good writing is good writing. I just ask for a continuation of the continuation of THIS cynergy of
    her character, and far less of the assenine overthe top bullshit that has comprised the greater bulk of the chapters. Please enough of the mindless, willess vacous sex toy bullshit. I'm not asking for her to beat the fuckers into submission, just turn more to what you did here; her having to make do with going through hell, and having no choice but make these assholes cum. Enough collars that render blackmail needless. Really, why write another word once it's on?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2015
    She's not being dominated in this chapter vsnake. She's just being fucked and dissapointed. That said Good chapter. Her feeling disapointed takes from her. She may be in charge, but of a situation she has no choice but to be in. Good job.
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  • From VFSNAKE on April 06, 2015
    Nice! Keep going. I like Lara being dominated. Its hot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2015
    Don't bother telling him anything resembling praise for this 'new direction'. He's just going back to the mindless fuck toy. He just wants to be loved. You he will ignore. Honest, his own words.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2015
    You updated.
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