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Reviews for Mirror Image

By : PyramidHead316
  • From maiafay376 on March 07, 2007
    Interesting...and look forward to where you take this. I know I could read this on ff.net, but I think I'll wait while you revise and post here. I own a CS2 group over on FF.net, and will probably add this story to it if you don't mind. I'm collecting well-written SH fics for that group, since I think many are overlooked because they are either not parodies or feature ONLY canon characters. So, of course you know I have plenty of OC driven stories within that group (but canon stories as well--I don't discriminate).

    Anyway, I really can't see why this was sporked at one time...I think it sounds fine. Heather could be a little more sarcastic, but there was no cause in this chapter for her to display that reaction. I also think it's interesting that you kept Heather's hair dark...when it's blonde in the game. Which means either "daddy" is not all that concerned with the Order finding Heather, or there's another reason I don't know about. Same with Alessa...I'm wondering how she's there and what direction the plot will venture off in telling her story. If Alessa is technically "okay" (meaning, not evil or puking blood, or frolicking around a bloody carousal), how was Heather created? Since Alessa only spliced her soul to insure that she could not birth God and then the second time as a result of Harry's involvement. How does Heather exist?

    Unless, you have a AU version of those events that shaped her? Again, it's tempting to peek at ff.net, but I'll restrain myself and view it here.

    Look forward to the next chapter.
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