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Reviews for The opening

By : darkness3322
  • From EddieTheLightbringer on October 15, 2007
    Okay this has been bothering me for some time but I keep forgetting to say something about it...

    Where the hell is your story? You come off to an impressive beginning with your author's note, but it cuts off before that finishes. You'd get some feedback if you would simply re-post it.
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