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Reviews for “Angel of Twilight: Clockwork Breakdown”

By : HappyDragon
  • From ANON - Kage on October 25, 2012
    I was too lazy to log in but I just sat down and reread all of it. I was wondering if you had plans to update again at all. I hope everything is going well. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - xynorb on January 28, 2012
    I hope this is not a dead story now. I can't wait to see what happens with Riku as you have me wishing for more.
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  • From ANON - MPS SHADOWMASTER on January 22, 2012
    *kicks Lynn* Wakey wakey! Write up and send me new chappies already! Do you need me to send the last two I did again? Email me or I WILL send my fox boy after your lion-boi, GOT IT????
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  • From ANON - MPS SHADOWMASTER on June 16, 2011
    Lynn, angel, sugar, baby, CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry about the time, but I finished both chapppies. Mailed you the second one yesterday. Do I NEED to hunt down your D&D chars again?
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  • From ANON - This D E V I L -ish on May 02, 2011
    screw kairi n sora i likey ansem x riku the best!
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  • From shadowmaster on February 21, 2011
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Huh, why was the heart decoration removed?

    Ermmm.............. You're having problems with your tags. You're gonna have to edit for that.

    And lastly: CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Really lastly: who knew threatening someone's D&D character with my own new one would work to get an update?

    Truly lastly: Check your email!

    Yes lastly: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OverlyLongGag
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  • From XianaTsuya on February 17, 2011
    *gapes and then cheers*
    This story is awesome!
    It's really good and I can't
    wait to read some more.
    *cheers for Fenrir/Axel*
    I forgot Loki's hair was sorta red
    and it would make sense for Fenrir to
    be a red wolf...Axel is perfect for it xD!
    Thanks for writing an awesome story and Riku...
    Hurry up and kick Ansem's ass already! >
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2011
    Thankyou for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Noir Genesis on February 09, 2011
    my god! chapter 2/3 has to be the best lemon EVER!

    screw sora and kairi i mean dayam!

    ahem

    ansem riku for the win if you ask moi!!!

    *keeps reading*
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  • From shadowmaster on January 08, 2011
    *looks at date* *looks at when AoT:CB was last updated* *sets the male were-fox ranger(sniper sub-type)her BF is allowing her to a REALLY high level, and goes hunting for a water-elemental-demyx-bard* You are getting REALLY close to six months since you last updated. You are leaving me and every other lover of this fic high and dry. This is a WONDERFUL story, AND I WANNA KNOW HOW RIKU GETS CONTROL OF ANSEM'S POWERS!!!!!!!! *Bursts into tears* Please update? *begs and uses puppy-dog eyes*
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  • From MemoryManipulatorNamine on June 10, 2010
    Oh wow, I really love your story. I just read all 11 chapters in....like less than 24 hours. I really hope that you continue to write for this story; I really want to know how the story ends.

    I loved that Axel is Fenrir. that just totally makes my day.
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  • From shadowmaster on January 27, 2010
    re: your notes [1]-- yes. David bowie did his glam-rock phase in i think the 70's. [2] yes. (i'm kinda a bowie fan. only 23, but yeah.)

    re: your need of a beta-- *poke poke* i'm on almost every night. I got crappy hours at work, but i usually sleep in late and can't get to sleep 'till ridicules. yeah, my sleep schedule is whacked. I'm pretty good at catching grammar and spelling. I would be happy to help.

    re: general review-- i squee'd when my nifty new firefox add-on said you'd updated. I love it. still not really hooking fenrir to axle, cause i've only found one source saying fenrir had something with fire, but i'm letting it slide under artistic license. it is a lovely picture of an elaborate mind fuck, well, half-way. i'm trying to see where you're going with the org. XIII half, but i'm kinda failing. the bridges between the halves are clearly laid out, and it's well written. it looks like you're giving your self plenty of wiggle room, which is great (the real world can be a real bitch). and i want to see more. lots more. but that's normal. hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - nobody on January 27, 2010
    i've been a fan of this story for a long while and just figured i should say how much i've enjoyed it. i love your writing style; it has a good flow and the descriptions are vivid and expressive. i look forward to reading more.
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  • From shadowmaster on August 29, 2009
    WOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOOO!!!!!!!!!! FINALY! Yes you did take too long to update, but I'll forgive you. I didn't know psionics existed in AD&D, and goodie for you and your DM letting you play a Demy. Mine wouldn't have let me, house rules guys are guys, girls are girls ingame. But in a Horror-type setting we're starting to set up, I'm gonna be an Axel cosplayer. -- Think Halloween Town variations of him. ..........Hey, ....Could you send people to Halloween Town? PLeeeaaaasssseeeeeeeeeee????? For me?
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  • From ANON - Kage on August 10, 2009
    Not on my computer so refused to log in. Wonderful chapter, it was good to see that you updated. I look forward to the next, keep up the good work.
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