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Reviews for “Angel of Twilight: Clockwork Breakdown”

By : HappyDragon
  • From ANON - :DDD on July 07, 2009
    Sorry for reviewing twice. Guess I freaked out a little. I notice writers tend to torture Riku, hell, I like reading fics with Riki angst too. But yea, this one is more painful then anything I have read so far. The poor dear! Anyway, I finally finish reading the chapters you have posted. Now to type a proper review. I love Axel x Roxas. Demyx too! They are my 3 favorites in the organization! I love the personalities you gave your characters! King Mickey especially, he's a dear and a good friend, totally what Riku needs! I'm going to miss him once he's separated from Riku. Riku method of copping, how he picture Kairi & Sora instead, is heartbreaking and sweet and while I don't like them together as a threesome, I think I can stand it in this story. I think his reaction to his rape make sense to me and is so him. Ansem while so twisted is so in character, I'm speechless and mad at him. Again I hope he meets with a terrible end! I hope Riku won't be drag down with him though. I look forward to Riku & Roxas interaction and how their fight will play out. I also love your sense of humor.
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  • From ANON - @_@ on July 06, 2009
    Holy fuck. I think I'm going to be sick.

    I don't mean that as an insult to your fic but just, 'Oh. My. God.' I just came across this fic today and is currently at chp 5. My heart is wrenching for Riku. That he has to go through something so wrong! Ansem is a bad, BAD man. Hell, I can't find words to describe how evil you have made him! For you to be able to write him so twisted is just...wow. I hope he meets with a seriously terrible end! I need to picture Riku stabbing the man a million times over to calm myself down! I'm so totally enthralled by your fic. It's so horridly wrong and yet I just can't stop reading. Something is so wrong with me! I hope these feelings I get over reading your fic is enough of a praise for your writing. Now to calm down and read on...
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  • From ANON - MPS SHADOWMASTER on February 25, 2009
    *SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!* *dances in joy* yay! you updated! ..........axel = Fenrir....... ok, i'll be honest, i would have never seen it. that said, i have something eriely (sp?) similar in mind, in a star trek crossover world. err, dimension. and as for dem being a bard, you do know that in the first few versions of dungeons & dragons that some DMs did not allow bards in their games? the designers of the game made them almost too powerful. *grin*

    well, what happens next?
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  • From ANON - Wulfie89 on January 30, 2009
    Gods I love this story! I was never really one for AnsemxRiku but I thought 'hey...why not give it a shot....' I'm so glad that I did....you chapters are long a juicy....you have different things going on at once so I can't get bored with just the same old thing constantly....you have great descriptions so one can't get confused to easily while reading. True I spotted a few grammatical things but hey....we all make mistakes sometimes. I just can't wait for the next update and hope to see it soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Caroline on January 29, 2009
    Hiya. Just wanted to let u know that I love your story and that I actually always read all the intros and extros and therefore decided to leave you a comment. I usually don't because I'm not the type to have concrit about stories I just like them, so I most often don't have very much to say. Either way I think your story is both believeable and interesting, I can tell that you really put a lot of thought in to what you write. So keep up the good work ;D

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  • From KagetsuAsame on January 28, 2009
    Wonderful, I look forward to the next part, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Liann on November 14, 2008
    Wow, love this. Have been lurking around for a while but I've never actually left a review, but seeing as I'm in love with your fic I thought that even thou I don't have very much to write, maybe it would encourage you to write more. Hopefully it worked!
    :D
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  • From shadowmaster on October 20, 2008
    oh, and by the way, a couple of sites for research - meo-team.com and exteremerestraints.com
    there's some overlap, but... yeh.
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  • From shadowmaster on October 20, 2008
    More? Please? over all an excelent (sp?) story,the only REAL problem I have is .....................(wait for it)................................................................................(wait for it...) ..................................................................................................................................... the length. It needs to be longer. As in more story. As in, how does Riku beat Ansem. As in, I'm saving a full copy of your story, in case I'm stuck off-line. As in, where the hell is Riku NOW??? He ATE the world's heart, that world is GONE, so where the HELL is he?????? I'm dieing here! Throw me a bone, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From KagetsuAsame on October 15, 2008
    Wonderful, I was glad to see that you updated, keep up the good work and I look forward to more.
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  • From itasasunaru on June 20, 2008
    I absolutely love your stories, I love how you incorporate so much plot into them, I am getting *almost* sick of plot-less lemon's because they only hold your interest during the duration of which you read them. This story however, holds my interest through out the day. I am constantly wondering what will happen next and I can't wait to read whatever you come up with. Just so you know, I made this account for the soul purpose of leaving you a review. I don't really write stories so I never really saw any reason to get an account but when I read your story I just had to leave a review. Great job, keep up your amazing-ness and I can't wait for your next chapter!!!
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  • From Higuchimon on February 29, 2008
    I very much enjoyed this new chapter. It was worth waiting for. Not just the trauma on Riku, but everything about it. I laughed frequently as Roxas and Axel were looting the town, and I liked that you gave the lesser Nobodies such personality. It really worked for me. And everything that went on with Riku was just wonderful...in a reading sense. It's nothing I'd want to experience of course.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on February 28, 2008
    You have to update again soon. I thought you had gone away and was happy to see that you updated, even if it was a few months ago. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Xendrassk on December 14, 2007
    Thank you for returning to life! ahem...got otta hand there...I'm totally execited about the future chapters! forgive me, but I've been stalking for later chapters for some time. I know, I know.... anyway, Ansem~Handsome kicks ass! Totally hot!!! uh oh...too long...gotta go!!! Later!!!
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  • From Higuchimon on September 23, 2007
    Maybe I'll say something coherent when I can stop laughing about this chapter. It's nice laughter, though, because it was just *funny* in so many ways. A good contrast to what happened in the last chapter with Riku.

    And was that a hint that in your world at least Axel considers Loki his father? If so, is that true or just something Axel himself believes?
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