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Reviews for “Angel of Twilight: Clockwork Breakdown”

By : HappyDragon
  • From ShowndraRidge on August 15, 2007
    I seem to always review when people are ready to update (missed this chapter being updated)...

    I was totally thinking of Thor as soon as Ansem started talking about toys... and that site. (One minor question though, why did you tell people not to go there unless their an adult when this site is an adult site too?)

    Anyway I will now be waiting for your next update...
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  • From Shihazriah on August 15, 2007
    I'm glad to see you are still alive and kicking. I had forgotten about this but saw it was updated so I went through and read it all again along with your author note. I feel really bad for Riku. I so want him to just stab Ansem to death. I'm looking forward to your update though.
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  • From huntedsnark on August 15, 2007
    :: takes a beta-cookie ::
    i'll be your beta. :)
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  • From ANON - Xendrassk on July 17, 2007
    Praises be to you Lynn! I absolutly LOVE the way you wrote Ansem-handsome! The way I envisioned him. The erotic man that he is. And my poor babydoll(Riku) for participating in the act of learning sex. I adore you Lynn! Keep up the extraordinary work! ^_^
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  • From Higuchimon on July 17, 2007
    Impressive. Somehow, the 'education' aspect makes it worse for Riku, because he's hearing how he can't stop himself from enjoying it, and feeling it at the same time. And since we know he was a researcher, maybe he spent a little time researching this. ;) Looking forward to seeing what else happens with them all soon.
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  • From ShowndraRidge on July 17, 2007
    ...I want a new chappy, but that's just me.
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  • From ANON - Height Deprived on July 16, 2007
    Aye, I'm a lurker. I've been following this story from the first chapter, and despite having no previous experience with reading or writing Ansem/Riku, the thought has crossed my mind more than once. I like your style and your characterisation, and I especially like your long chapters. =D It's well-written and not overly cliche, so I salute you for a job well done. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    Gimme story! The quality will be just as good, I'm certain! Story, story, story!
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  • From KagetsuAsame on July 14, 2007
    I look forward to the next part and am curious when you plan on updating again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2007
    AWROOOROOOO!! >< yay!1 hahha you put almondroca in there!! and suuuushi!!! >< *dances* ack it was so cute with them heheh poor demyx!!! TT.TT and Riku!! *tears* buuut it was still good!! this chappie was so long hahha *clap* yayy! thankyou for updating >
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  • From Higuchimon on June 19, 2007
    A very good continuation to the story. I liked the faire they went to (I went to one myself a couple of years ago, though I wasn't in costume). I really feel for Riku. I think you're handling it well, all things considered. He's not alone, he has a person he respects who is returning that respect, that can go a long way towards helping someone keep their mental balance. Well done.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on May 09, 2007
    I love Ansem, he's so sinfully wicked, and of course I can't help but root for the bad guy. Keep it up.
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  • From QueenAdreena on May 02, 2007
    Ooh, this is an amazing story so far. I'm such a fan of long chapters: the longer the better! Your description is fantastic, enviously so. The style of your writing and the way you word things makes this all the more worthy to read. Keep it up!
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  • From Higuchimon on April 26, 2007
    Well, THAT was incredible to read...the characterization was lovely, it made sense for him to strike as quickly as possible, and Riku played into his hands just the way Riku would. Poor guy. When he wakes up, he's not gonna be happy at all. ;) Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Xendrassk on April 14, 2007
    Great Story! Keep up the work! Too bad there aren't many Ansem/Riku fics out there. Be inspired and keep going, because the Xemnas/Saďx fics are doing a hostle takeover!
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