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Reviews for A Proper Thank You

By : dragovianknight
  • From Azudarko on June 25, 2010
    Really glad that someone wrote something for this pairing - this is the only one I've been able to find online.

    I guess my constructive criticism would be that you could take your time with the writing. You've got a fine voice, and the story would have benifited from a little more time spent with the characters, and a little more detail. (Saucy and otherwise.)
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  • From Siarra on January 31, 2008
    Very nice! Very nice, indeed.
    First off, I have to say that I totally love and adore your Yangus voice. It's absolutely right, the accent and speech pattern, and more importantly, the thought behind it. He's written as a solid and feeling character, not as simple comic relief, but a well conveying narrator. This makes the story flow wonderfully and while the tone is nice and light, it's very sympathetic and their coupling is actually both sweet and hot.
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  • From ZombieDuke on May 25, 2007
    *wide grin* Thank you. That was bloody well written!!!
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