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Reviews for Vaida's Harem - The Moments Between

By : WotanAnubis
  • From SaraJaye on September 05, 2007
    I never noticed that about Priscilla till this chapter. XD But hopefully Serra's lesson has changed that. LOVED this chapter, Serra/Priscilla is hot.
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  • From goalt on May 25, 2007
    Oh, wow. That was perfect/
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2007
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    ........hot dayum. short but hey, what the hell. if you pull off what you need to pull off then.....so be it.
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  • From SaraJaye on May 24, 2007
    Wow. I've only ever seen one other instance of futanari that was actually sexy, and it was a Hot Tails (I think) manga a friend sent me. *_* This is the only other time I've actually found dickgirls hot.
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  • From ANON - a-non on May 08, 2007
    Hey, I love your stories, not because I find them arousing (yuri generally isn't my thing), but because they're genuinely well-written. I like what you're doing here, with the expansion of various relationships. Towards that end, I'd like to point out one particular sentence that struck me as having the potential to be fleshed out:

    "Isadora and Farina were spending quite a lot of time together, talking quietly to one another. Presumably they had both figured out that they had a certain blonde wyvern lord in common."

    That came from Chapter 3 of the main story. Some elaboration might be in order.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2007
    WAIT!! i'll have one futa or two w/ my louise. preferably? fiora (futa)X louise(norm) X any/everyone else (futa)

    maybe farina and fiora could, have an open relationship? or have i forgotten the part where they said they wouldn't >_>

    come on, it's a harem.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2007
    ok, so w/ the louise chapter- at the end, she speaks of needing something. i'm not one for female body processes, but what is that regular something?

    sounds good to me though. i gotta see it. her ellipsi defnitely hint at something fun to read.

    but it's all a little depressing isn't it? how the lovebirds have to leave each other. Pent, that stupid old fool.
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  • From goalt on May 02, 2007
    Yeah, I'd like to see Isadora win Karla sometime, too.
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  • From SaraJaye on May 02, 2007
    Nice. Priscilla really likes the sex-change spell, doesn't she. XD

    You're still planning to do Vaida/Serra in the main story, right? When Serra's joined, could you do a chapter of this story with Serra/Priscilla? I've always loved that pairing.
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  • From Streti on May 01, 2007
    I actually read this one first. The story was a very nice futa take on Priscilla, and it was lovely to see the idea of Karla used as a chess board passed on, the sexy notion of the scene seems to carry more weight here. While reading the Priscilla chapter in the main story, however, she seemed to be curiously sure about having been impregnated, if that was her purpose. If she wants to carry a child, maybe she should make sure of her pursuit.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2007
    hot. yeah, i totally forgot that priscilla actually won in the main story.....stupid me.

    anyway, i still love that thing you do when you work in their backstory and personality quirks DURING the sex and foreplay. so it's sexy AND in character. very much so. in a way that if i wanted to make say, a zelda fic, i wouldn't be able to replace priscilla w/ zelda and submit it. wait, maybe i could but......point is, it's not just in character, but CHARACTER EXCLUSIVE!!

    and it's hot.
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  • From goalt on May 01, 2007
    I was rather hoping something like this would come about. :D

    Well, I must say I'd love to see anything to do with subby Karla. >.>

    (Perhaps I should say something more specific, but I'm tired. I'll say something worthwhile... sometime else).
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2007
    I also want to see what happens after the chess game.......*crosses fingers for isadora, since she's so much smexier than priscilla*......and basically.....pretty much everything that other guy said.

    great to see you're back at it.
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  • From ANON - Cheetah7071 on April 29, 2007
    I'd personally like to see the results of that chess game, though I don't really have any preferences on how the scene plays out.

    Another scene I'd like to see is Priscilla giving Farina her first penis, causing her to go on something of a rampage, for lack of a better word, among the harem.
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