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Reviews for Samus gets whats coming

By : qwerty47667
  • From AngelMeiru on February 28, 2009
    Very, very Out of character. Samus is NOT a submissive weakling. Heck, I don't think she even fears death. I bet she would rather die fighting than let someone take advantage of her like that. Have you even played the Metroid series? Do your character homework before writing okay?
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  • From WotanAnubis on May 02, 2007
    Hmm. This so isn't my kind of story, but I'm a sucker for Metroid fics, so I couldn't resist. I probably shouldn't have, but... well... Couple of things:

    There's the huge wall of text bit. A few more line breaks would help make everything look cleaner.

    The sex is short and not particularly descriptive. Especially the wasps/metroids thing. Seriously, why just that single little sentence? You're telling, not showing.

    Your great and magnificent hero, the Brain, lacks credibility. The Space Pirates are a malevolent alien race of their own. Why did they accept a human as their leader? Especially one infused with the blood of the hated Chozo? For that matter, why the heck did the Chozo give this guy their blood? Oh, and, why the repeated emphasis on the fact that his cock is 11 inches big?

    The title of your fic puzzles me as well. "Samus gets what's coming to her"? Are you saying that if you save the galaxy and all mankind a lot you deserve to be raped and beaten? Or is it just women?

    Also, Samus gets taken out by a single Metroid to the face? Come on. You might as well have her twist her ankle next.

    I'm going to let the fact that Samus gets a hugely satisfying orgasm from being raped and beaten slide. That kind of thing seems expected in this sort of fic, I suppose. But it does hurt the believability of this fic even more.
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