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Reviews for When Distant Hearts Beat As One

By : KamirineGoddess
  • From Captara on January 15, 2008
    *Cries* Sora step away from Kairi and run as your little feet can carry you. But for real though. I love the story so please keep it up^^

    .:Yuki-san:.
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  • From gravitybutterfly on October 07, 2007
    I really really hope you continue this story. It's very good! I love how you have Riku and Sora's point of view. I also want to find out how things go on with Leon and Cloud! Normally I don't like MPreg fics, but.. :D Who cares, this is good!
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  • From on August 30, 2007
    About time you update! I loved the end of this chapter,though I just wish Kairi and Sora would have broken up because I NEED Sora and Riku together! Update sooner next time!!
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  • From on June 08, 2007
    LMFAO!!!!!!! I love Axel so much. He was more than worth reading this chapter for, just for him to ask the stupid question at the end! Though I'm worried about Leon: it sounds like he's going through exactly what Cloud was only Seifer (I believe it's him so I'll call "Him" Seifer) was an actual ass to Leon and Cloud was more than likely being a baby.

    Cloud needs to stop being a little bitch and just let himself be ravished by sex on legs Sephy!

    Your awesome, the story is awesome, update soon!
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  • From on May 31, 2007
    HOLY FUCK! Leon x ? x Cloud x Sephiroth love quad?? Fuckin sweet.

    Why don't you just rid of Kairi and put the pair together? I do have a question: why is Riku taking all this so well? Are you going to explain that or will you just tell us. I actually like that he's not bouncing off the wall but I wonder why he's so calm.

    This chapter was great, I love Axel and Roxas so much and them spying was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From DaughterOfTheDarkness on May 30, 2007
    That Axel and Roxas at the door scene made me giggle ^_^
    I'm so happy Riku's being so good to Sora! Though it is a bit unnerving that he took to Sora's being pregnant without much of a freakout...
    I like how you explained his pregnancy as well, by the way. Very creative ^_^

    I WAS going to antagonize Cloud for being with Sephy behind Leon's back...but Leon's just as bad!
    What WILL happen between them?
    HOW will Kairi react to Sora's 'condition'?
    WHEN will Sora figure out that she's useless and go be with Riku?!?!
    ...
    I have no idea, but I can't wait to find out.
    ^_^
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  • From FayeV on May 21, 2007
    That was great!!! Good way to explain the pregnancy! ;) Can't wait for the next chappie! Although I am dreading what'll happen between Cloud and Sephiroth...and yet soooooo excited to see what'll happen between Riku n' Sora!!! Update soon! (Which is another thing I've noticed you're good at! kudos) :D
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  • From on May 20, 2007
    AWESOME!I'm so happy that Riku took the news as well as he did, though his views on what it takes to be a parent were hiliarous. And a tip of the hat for 1. Actually explaining why Sora had gotten pregnate so well and 2. the actual reason. Very creative and original. Anywho, I gotta love your story, and I can't wait for the next update, you update it so fast, I love you!
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  • From on May 20, 2007
    Awesome chapter! Riku's side of the story sounds far more believable and Kairi does come off as liking to place the blame on others. Sora throwing up all over the place was funny though.
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  • From DaughterOfTheDarkness on May 16, 2007
    Yet another great chapter. I like the fact that you're going into so much detail regarding Riku and Kairi's relationship. You've really gotten me hooked on this story, and that's not an easy thing to do.
    ^_^

    There was just one tiny thing that bothered me though. I only noticed it because I come from a family of doctors. Near the end, you mentioned some of the tests that DiZ was going to have to run on Sora, and you said they would include drawing blood, getting X-rays, and administering a pregnancy test. Well...someone who is pregnant can't have X-rays taken due to the risk of harming the unborn baby. Like I said, it was a tiny thing, but I thought I'd mention it, at least.
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  • From FayeV on May 13, 2007
    Well...from those memories Riku seems more the bastard than Kairi. I hope that's not true! But at least Riku and Sora are feeling the rightness. =) Update soon!!!
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  • From on May 11, 2007
    Dude. Don't know what to make of that chapter. I was so ready to hate Kairi, even had a pitchfork and now...I actually almost kinda in an odd way, sorta...feel bad for her. Not by much because it's Riku, but...wow. So...who's the bad guy? Did Riku actually make the bet? Did Larxine or whatever set that all up? Did Kairi intentionally steal Sora? Will I stop being a loser and asking so many questions?

    I love the story! Keep writing!!
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  • From Sekre on May 10, 2007
    Whoo, what a fucked up situation. Can't wait to read more ^^.
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  • From on May 08, 2007
    LMAO!!! Riku and Sora are so stupid fun. And you really could have included the Axel and Roxas caramel scene. Wouldn't have hurt us. Very tasty really. Another great chapter. Please, update soon!
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  • From HopelesslyEscaflowne on May 07, 2007
    Chapters 1-2:
    Oh wow, that was really good, the RikuxSora moments! My only wish is that Sora finds out about Kairi's true nature sooner rather than later. ;) I suspect that she had some sort of plan to separate Riku and Sora before she was even with Sora and if so that makes her one conniving little bitch indeed, lol. Let's hope Riku and his friends can expose her and get Sora to change his mind. After all, Sora still doesn't know that his fate was sealed when he slept with Riku. ;) I hope you update again soon with chapter 3!
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