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Reviews for Rules of Seduction

By : ElvenAngel

From ANON - ElvenAngel on July 11, 2008
XD I am well aware of that Marc, but if he was going to get a good time by a lady, I don't really think he'd mind letting said lady have her way a little, haha.
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From MacAnimeGirl on February 25, 2008
I love the fic. The rules she comes up with are quite genuine and the way she teaches them to Dante is funny as hell. I liked the way you got these two together. But I didn't think that Dante would let himself be dominated so easily.
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From ANON - dantesmissy on January 31, 2008
Hetero doesn't suit Dante. Just doesn't. DxV Forever!
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From ANON - Karmakode on January 09, 2008
Its true then, that there exist DMC fanfics without brother-on-brother action. o_o I think my faith in God's been restored.

Good story overall. Why aren't people reviewing this more? And sheesh, Solstice isn't really saying anything substancial, IMO. And they're supposed to be top dog of DMC fics. Psh, my hat. I;m no writin' genius but even I can tell this is a real jewel. Sure, you do need to go back to it and catch up with some weird typos and some odd grammar, but its so scattered about I can tell you actually took time to edit it before you posted.

That's good enough for me. Oh, and nice character. Oh, and cool sex scene. Got me horny >X3
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From ANON - b-marrow34 on January 08, 2008
My sister made me read this, even though she knows I prefer DantexVergil and OCs put me off overall and I really can't imagine dante paired with a girl.

But...damn, you really DO deliver. If you wrote yaoi I bet I'd be your no. 1 fan. The story's pretty cool and your writing's neat and easy to read. I liked your writing of Dante. He sounds cute. Your OC's better than other sluts I've seen created to be paired with Dante... At least, you made sure to create a setting and establish their past. Most people don't even do that. Anyway, good story over all. Wish you'd do yaoi too.
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From ANON - Nougat on January 08, 2008
My GOD, a DMC fanfic that's not yaoi! XD;

Ahem, now that's out of my system I can be more proper. I was a little worried when I saw the tag OC, but after reading through the story I'm pleased and happy to see there's people out there who CAN create well-rounded non-Sue characters. I really liked Tess, she's charming and lively and has a nice, very 'real woman' quality to her.

The plot was nice and fun to follow, and I think I agree with the way you portray Dante, obnoxious and stubborn and yet so...so charming, haha. :p Why WAS she not just giving in, I wonder. (j/k) But yeah, I kinda knew it, nobody can resist Dante. I also loved your language use and vocabulary, particularly in the sex scene. Are you a Literature student by any chance? You write like one!

I'm only gonna fuss over some typos I saw here and there, but that's nothing a good editing won't fix, and its nothing that removes from the good quality of the story. Again, great work. This site needs more writers like you! ;) You might even be better than Solstice! *causes a universal gasp of shock*
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From ANON - Steph on October 01, 2007
yay! I finished it! ^o^ very well done! hehe great job! - I want to go play this game now! *o* lmao >.
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From ANON - Steph on September 28, 2007
lol - awesome job so far! ^o^ I'll read the rest and review again, but I wanted to note some thing before I forgot:

She's NOT mary-sue-ish at ALL! @o@ She's awesome and very funny! ^o^ hehe

And these lines made me laugh a LOT in the last few chapters:

"If I was a man, you wouldn't be doing this!" - That was priceless, mde me laugh a lot, especially after our DA convo @o@ lmao

"...I�m an alien cockroach, I killed Dante, skinned him for disguise, locked him in the basement and I plan to carry you off for experiments" he stated mock-seriously. - Now that's the best line EVER! >...
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From ANON - Keota on September 01, 2007
XD Awesome fic! The interaction between Tess and Dante is better than anything Capcom can come up with!

One thing I want to point out is....
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NOT ENOUGH SMUT!
X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3
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From ANON - Tim (aka Jinsame) on July 12, 2007
The entire thing was excellent and well written, you rule!!

Honestly though, you did a great job of what could have been very short and unsatisfying. You gave the characters a real personality and threw them into several different emotional situations in which you were able to keep the whole thing convincing within the fantasy world they live in.

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From Camaro on July 08, 2007
Hi there. I just read your review for Primal and noticed that you apparently had some questions. First off, I'd like to say thank you very much for your compliments and your honest review. I appreciate that you weren't sugar-coating your dislike of "twincest" though I do feel that you're very biased when it comes to reading them.

You asked why people don't review your story and I had a few very good ideas as to the subject. To begin, as with your apparent dislike of twincest and your tendency to throw fics into a stereotype because of it, people often read your summary (as I did) and find it to be VERY stereotypical of a mary-sue fic. Dante with an OC character who has super powers. Ho hum.

Now even though I'm sure it ISN'T one of those (judging by your apparent dislike of most things you deem "lesser" than yours in the fandom) that's what it strikes me as. Just like you consider my story to be cliche because it involves two men having sex (occasionally, despite the fact that there is actually more hetero involvement in it), I read your summary a while back and concluded that it wouldn't be my type of thing.

Maybe people don't want to read your story because of your incessant need to banter on and on about the things you hate regarding everyone else's fics. Yes, we get it, you don't like twincest. We see that. It was thrown into our faces by your bio. There's really no need to go and read stories about it only to criticize the author later.

I didn't write a story with twincest in it because that was what I thought people wanted to read. It was because it was what I wanted to read and to explore further through writing it. And my story isn't even ABOUT that..so considering it borderline cliche is a bit unfair simply because there are NOT many fanfics that involve both hetero and yaoi.

Either way, I will definitely read your story and review when I find the time. Now that I get the feeling that you're a very well versed person, I think I will enjoy what you've prepared here. One thing I would suggest would be changing up the summary. It doesn't really give the impression that you've spent a lot of time on the story, on making it unique from the other OC fics. Plus, I generally steer clear of any one-shots as they aren't really my thing.

But enough going on and on! I'll check back another time!

Solstice
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From ANON - Demonspawn on July 06, 2007
Loved it! A great mixture of humor, action and steamy scenes (if I had glasses they would've fogged up *grin*). Dante's such a horndog XD I like how you let the story build up in tension and the unwelcome interruptions by Enzo were hilarious :3 You've portrayed the uncertainty in them well, 'cause even when things can look clear-cut and uncomplicated, they don't have to be. Also with that comes the fact us women sometimes have the tendency to see things more complicated then they are >__>
Sorry, hope you don't mind too much, but I'm going to be a nitpicking twit on just one tiny, minor, (rather insignificant) point; you use 'bellowed' a fair bit of times and that's similar to shouting...in some cases other words would fit the situation better (maybe 'groan' or 'grunt' etc)...just a little pet peeve of mine *hides under a rock*

't was great to read Phoebs.

*from under rock* I'd love to see a pic of Roy in his human form... *_*

Greets,
Abyss
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From ANON - Hassan on May 24, 2007
I've read many fanfictions, I've read many romance stories... but rarely do either of them do what Rules of Seduction does.

It keeps the tension in the right amounts, and keeps the tease without being overly bothersome. The description is well done and very powerful, particularly in the last "scene" xD

The highlight of the story has got to be it's dialogue, which is always fresh and well executed.

A great peice of erotic and romantic storytelling of some great characters. Amazing stuff
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From ANON - Techmarine Chris on May 23, 2007
*Kneels in front of your greatness.*
Phoebe, you have once again struck genius. This "smut-fic" is a masterpiece of writing, romance and satisfaction-of-horny-boys. I know because I am a literature fan, a romantic and a horny boy, all wrapped up in one package. XD
I like how you kept the story to a romantic level instead of the usual sex-in-every-chapter thing one sees in most smut-fics. It gives the fic more class and presses the horny readers to read onward and experience a great tale, instead of giving them the "fapping material" they crave for from the first chapter and turning them off from reading the rest. (I speak of experience... >.> ) I also enjoyed how you explored the feelings of Dante and Tess (for each-other and their personal thoughts). Kudos for the brilliant action scene, too.
And finally, the smut of the fic was simply astounding. None have read a fanfic that excites one so much. True genius, Phoebe. True genius.

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From ANON - Omoi on May 21, 2007
ive only read bout 1/3 so far but i give it 8/10 ^^ ill finish it when im not preocupied and can sit to enjoy reading it =3
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