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Reviews for One Month

By : leanime
  • From on January 08, 2008
    you, my friend, are flippin hilarious. Axel and demyx sound like me and my friend....sumtimes. ANYWHO, this is sum nice piece of a-uhhhh fanfiction. yeeep. All your author notes are hilarious too. I've noticed you knwo some pretty rich people. I got ...pj pants for christmas. *shrugs* they're good for jogging too....*nods*. SO i hope you get another chapter up whenever or ill have to do...something...bad. =.=
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  • From BlueRose22 on January 07, 2008
    The sex was definitely fun and interesting (and hot!), but the characters are a bit lacking. Did I mention that the sex is hot?
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  • From ANON - Sora K. on June 10, 2007
    omfg!! when Axel said! "“By the way, you do know that it’s illegal for you to drink alcoholic beverages, my dear sixteen-year-old?”
    that killed me so bad!!!! xDDDDD Axel... when he said "dear sixteen year old" = TOTALLY PEDOFILE!!! xDD
    it's so cute!!! UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Mo on June 05, 2007
    Why are all your characters acting like they're horny 12 year old idiots? There's no unique distinction between them. They're all from the same poorly thought out cookie cutter.
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  • From alwaysabrat on June 05, 2007
    kay i love this story!!! and i cant wait for you to update it!! all the glorious types of sex: kinky ice play, fridge abuse, bathroon sex, and hot car sex!! WOW i will also now have the inage of cloud and leon togethter when ever i hear the bad touch song! great work!! XD
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