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Reviews for Betwixt

By : GMartini
  • From YamiBakura on May 09, 2011
    YOU ARE AN EVIL PERSON AND I HATE YOU!!!


    ...ExceptnotreallyOMFG PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED THIS STORY!!!
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  • From soraxcloud on May 02, 2008
    Ahahahahhaha! I love Rikus dad! He's freaking INSANE! xD
    Great story I hope you make more. *puppy-dog eyes*
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  • From BlueRose22 on November 29, 2007
    I'm really liking this story. The characters are all very well written (Riku's dad is my favorite).
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on November 27, 2007
    Riku's father scares me O_O......but i love this, please continue.....GO RIKU!! STEAL SORA BACK!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - K Sakurazawa on November 25, 2007
    I wanna thank you for writing this story~ It's so brilliantly awesome and I just can't wait for more. T___T
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  • From ANON - Mido-chan on November 03, 2007
    I'm so sorry, and I only read about half of the first chapter, but this is just too funny! My mom really did accuse me of being 'elmo'! I started laughing and she just 'tsk'ed me for being all 'elmo' and asked if I cut myself!
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  • From PervyYaoiFancier on November 02, 2007
    Brilliant. Just brilliant.

    I can't tell you how much this story amuses me, 'specially with Riku's pointed denial of Axel's sexyness. Oh, he will not resist for long, especially with Axel's magic fingers...*insert evil laughter here*

    Riku: DO NOT WANT. LOVE IT!! Papa is insane and sick and just this side of "special" ed. Mehe heh.

    WRITE ON, MY FRIEND!! WRITE ON AND SHARE YOUR WITTY ARTICULATE SNARKYNESS!!! ^_^
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  • From PervyYaoiFancier on October 14, 2007
    RIKUUUU!!! YOU FOOL!!! I can't beleive how stupid Riku is!! Gah! Let Kairi have Sora, HAVE SOME AXEL INSTEAD!!!

    Well, that's how I feel now, but before I was wanting to strangle mean 'ol dense Sora for being such an insensitive buttface. I have to say that this story is full of so many twists and turns and angst and love and fluff and comedy that I don't even know where to begin the praises! I am in love with this fic and it's snarky characters and plot! And you're the first person EVER to get me to like Selphie. Seriously. I have always hated her, intensely, but I just can't say no to yours. She's fabulous, and if Riku were straight, I'd say he should be with her and her madness...or and Axel/Selphie/Riku sammich. Yessss....Screw Sora! We don't need no stinkin' Sora!...*cry* Yes we do...

    Great work, I look forward to more!!
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  • From ANON - the Sora who's NOT marrying Kairi on October 07, 2007
    You know how much I am loving this fic right about now???


    Update MUCH~desu!!!
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  • From LemonLimeCrush on June 26, 2007
    Moooooooorrreeeessss. I've been aching for a good Riku x Sora fic, and the idea of Axel as well makes it super duper yummy. Update soon, yes?
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  • From TehAmeh on June 25, 2007
    Yes yes, well first of let me say that this is one of the most interesting SoraxRiku fanfics that I've read in a while.
    Axel'll be there? heh, it's interesting yes, but I'm sure it'll be well done none-the-less. You must update. Because that was such a mean clifhanger. *nod*

    I loved it, so please continue.
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  • From ANON - Jules on June 23, 2007
    Good story... except for Riku's dad. He talks like a pedophile from Japanese comics and it's scary.
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  • From ANON - XxJustXxAxXNobodyxX on June 19, 2007
    I really enjoy Betwixt on FF.net and I was just wondering when you will update it on there. I hope I don't sound like someone who nags, I'm just curious.
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  • From HappyDragon on June 10, 2007
    First of all, is Riku’s father based off of anyone/ any character, because I kept picturing Nathan Lane in his role for “Bird Cage”. Anyway, I loved that, it was perfectly hysterical and had be laughing in my seat.

    Secondly, you’re doing wonderfully with this, and I encourage you to continue it. I know that having it be Sora who jumps into Riku’s arms at the end would be a little too easy, but I also don’t think that either Tidus or Wakka have “auburn” hair. So that only leaves one of the girls, or things being a dream.

    Now I do admit that if it is a dream at the end, that’s pretty cheap. I’d also like to say you might want to reconsider the setup/transition to the island slightly, if it is a dream. I mean, I liked that you didn’t make it blazingly obvious that the chapter opened with a dream, and it did have a few hints, but they were extremely subtle, like only a hard core literature fan might catch them (like the jump into the water not killing/hurting him). That said, it did feel a little sudden when we found out that it was a dream. I’m sorry if I sound bossy, or if I’m not making much sense. ~__~;;;;;;;;

    But yes, this looks like a fun read, and I will defiantly have to follow with this.
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  • From Hitoshirezu69 on June 09, 2007
    -Pops review viginity- If you don't update, I'll cry! And then harass you til you do. lol
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