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Reviews for You are mine

By : tash1021
  • From ANON - dbx90 on August 03, 2013
    Dude you need to finish this cuz of you don't I'll track you down and slap you in the face with a fish its that good

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  • From ANON - w on July 31, 2010
    continue
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  • From ANON - Anton on March 26, 2009
    This is an interesting (and good) take on the OoT world.
    Please don't make us wait to much longer for the next update.
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  • From mturn71 on August 16, 2008
    please email me when the next chapters are up it's to good to stop there
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  • From ANON - Sana-chan on June 01, 2008
    no new chapter..:(
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  • From ANON - Sana-chan on May 30, 2008
    I know this is a link/ruto fic, but PLEAAASSSEEE!!! if you find ANY way to get him kidnaped back or something! T-T This would make such an awsome link/ganon but its not :(
    its totally ok if you dont want to, i would sooo rather you continue it the way you seam fit ^-^
    hope for another chapty soon ^O^
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  • From ANON - sana-chan on May 26, 2008
    Hey i havent reviewed in a looong time! Im so happy theres more chaptys ^-^
    keep smiling
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  • From ElfenDream on March 25, 2008
    yay!! this is the first "game" fic I`ve ever read bunny. and it was good. yes, yes.. you write really good. you do!!! don`t deny it!! *glares at Tash* ^_^ now,I only hope you woman yourself up to write me a damn good lemon somewhere along the line here. lol! I know you got it in you. ;P I`ll be waiting for an update. ((and my gods I want a hug from Link, just a hug though.. he is too sweet to erhm.. *looks for proper word* smutten up?? yeah, yeah.. you get what I mean. But you can smut him up later though XD))
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  • From Garbolo on March 16, 2008
    Great chapter... I loved how Ruto reacted when she saw link trying to help her. Please keep up the great work.
    P.S. I can't wait to see how Link and ruto get away
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  • From ANON - Sage of Oblivion on February 18, 2008
    It's a bit twisted, but what isn't these days.
    But youre style is very good detailed and emotional.
    And that is a big plus.
    Looking forward to the rest
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  • From DeadlySoulCaster on January 06, 2008
    Wow great story, I think Poke^up there pritty much summed everything up. I think this story is turning into one with a lot of flare and work, something I admire in the stories I read. And I assure you, this one is most definatly on my list! Over time I've learned to get over pairing misshaps, or pairings I thought I wouldn't like, suprising to say I am intrigued by Link/Ruto, in my younger days I was like, omg no, go for Malon or something, hell even one of them Gerudo guards, just not her. I find this story opening up my mind to this a little more, even though you haven't brought the little Water Princess in yet.

    Can't wait for the next update! Till then, I bid you adu.
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  • From ANON - Bianca on October 07, 2007
    I love this story so far...I can't wait for you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Pokeprof on September 24, 2007
    It's rare for me to review ANY story on AFF.net, since I consider about 80% of them to be lacking in the detail and coherency department and the rest of them not along the interest of my fandoms. That being said, I must say I like your story for two main reasons.

    One, it actually shows an Alternative Universe story done right, which is a thing that's rare in and of itself. Two, which goes hand and hand with reason one is that you didn't shove sex in here right off the bat, or at all even. You've gone into lots of depth and detail to support your story and eventually (I'm hoping), leading up to the coupling of Link and Ruto (which you've implied, as Link is wanting a lover like Water). I also find that while I would normally be repulsed by the implied Ganondorf/Link pairing, you bring a spin to it that makes it bearable, if not entertaining, having Ganondorf attracted to the power Link possess and his ambition to break him of it.

    However, this story isn't without it's issues. Many a time the story seems to be full of detail and vibrancy, only to fail at other such key points. For example, there was plenty of detail and emotion with Ganondorf thoughts about how he would bring down Link as his bitch, but when it came to the terrifying moment of Nabooru trying to hide her child, all she got was a simple line that only told us what she said, not how she felt nor the way her body was reacting. Then we've got the occasional misspelling or naming error, such as when Link's name is rendered as link and the like. While this is quite a small problem, it still brings some issue to the overall quality of the story.

    Regardless, I'm awaiting the next installment of your story and very much interested in how the relationship between Ruto and Link is going to play out, withs such drastic changes from the original storyline. Be sure, I will be reviewing it.

    Pokeprof
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  • From 1upmushroom on August 07, 2007
    You're right, you do suck at summaries. I see niether foot nor fin of Ruto. Even if you suck at summaries, what is the idea with decieving readers? Or have I just been fooled by the way this fic seems to hint at a completely different pairing that I avoid like the plague? In which case, no harm done.
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