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Reviews for Just Like in Soap Operas, but Worse

By : RangerPrincess
  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2007
    ai! that hurt... a hetro scene! Urgh, never disliked selph this much...
    Sora, just do it again! Maybe Riku will see what directin he should go ^^
    Roxas is so sweet^^ neally laughed my ass of^^ And Axel is just like the friend i always wanted to have... please... give him to me...

    I really like this story so far... Hope, you'll update soon!
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  • From on September 08, 2007
    +o+ Riku's crush on Selphie is obviously a passing thing :D thanks for updating!
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  • From FayeV on September 07, 2007
    lol Poor Riku...and wow, Selphie's a whore?! lol It's funny ta see Riku having to deny his gayness, like, all the time though...lol And ya killed me with the "do not enter" OMG too funny!!! Can't wait to hear their conversation later! Update soon! Lovin' it!
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  • From ANON - Taiyo-chan on September 06, 2007
    Okay, I only read the prolouge and first chapter, and already, I printed out the WHOLE story! I'm excited to read the rest! Awesome writing skill and story so far XD
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  • From ANON - Manin on September 03, 2007
    I'd wait forever to read your chapters! your Riku is easy enough to relate to, even if I've never been in a situation like his, and Axel is Effing Hilarious!!! XD keep up the amazing work....

    your loyal reader, Manin.
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  • From Cave on September 03, 2007
    Just read the past two chapters. Truth or Dare, always a good time, I must say. Oh, Axel~.

    These were some very funny chapters. Truthfully, I like Selphie and I don't mind how you've written her so far. xD Probably because everyone's a bit OOC and, I dunno, it's a fun story. I was thinking Riku would've screwed Selphie then afterwards was so ashamed he couldn't look at Sora, but hey that was cool too. ^^~ Can't wait to see how this little talk with Sora is going to go. :3
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  • From widdabitttttt on August 27, 2007
    lol, ok so i read this out loud to my boyfriend over the phone, and mind you he is really super straight and he didnt say much but i could tell he was into it and wasw upset when there wasnt any more. lol his exact words were 'well its deffinatly interesting...' lol now im giddy, just allow me to fangirl for a moment... *goes and fangirls in a corner and throws cookies at autuor.*
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  • From widdabitttttt on August 25, 2007
    wonderfulness. As a writer i try to review every story i read because they give me joy, but this isnt hard to think of something to say!!!! lol, totally loved it. i really like your style and i appreciate how hard it is an au fics, or any fics for that matter to not do someone ooc, but you got riku (in my mind) spot on!! (thats tha hardest part for me!) axel is a little off, but it really works for me. great job, and keep up the good work!
    ---Myself^.~ -------
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  • From FayeV on August 14, 2007
    LOL HaHa!!! Riku wanted that!!! I bet he's pissed at Axel now!!! I believe this is where it all begins!!! Can't wait ta find out what happens next!!!! Update soon!!! :)
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  • From nakedlink on August 10, 2007
    It's pretty good so far. Although the brothers!love is a little cliche, you've done it okay so far. Although Axel is acting like an idiot I love him and I hope that Roxas isn't really dating Namine *makes a face* Hee hee hee. I don't know if your going to make it more dramatic or start towards an ending. I'm excited to see, though, please update. At your own leisure of course... >.>;
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  • From ANON - angel on August 10, 2007
    wow that story rocked!! i totally loved it! but man....i have 2 say i wish there was just more lol well im not 100% sure if ur gunna post new chapters but if u ever do just email me kk


    p.s. did i mention i loved the story? XD
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  • From on August 08, 2007
    :D You don't know how big my smile was when I was reading this. Really big, bigger than Axel's 5-footer, lol. I wanted to laugh, really, but it would be really loud and I would feel crazy afterwards X3 so i opted for smiling. I'm sure you're very funny in real life, but you hold it in and save it for the readers XD And I know that Riku must've really liked thinking 'fuck' along with 'Sora'. Thanks for writing!
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  • From HappyDragon on August 07, 2007
    ‘The Perverted World of Axel’ (TM: Ashley) powns real life!!

    Sorry . . . . . I’ve actually been lurking around since . . . somewhere around the prologue. I haven’t said much because . . . .there’s not much to say that hasn’t been said by others.

    Sorry! ^.^;;;;

    That and, I like giving full critiques . . . which take time and energy that I never seemed to have when a new chapter of this popped up. o.O Odd, no?

    Bah, anyway . . . . so far, so good. Please don’t be offended, but I’m approaching this like it’s a ‘Dime Novel’/’Harlequin Romance’ (which is, I think, the literary equivalent of a SoapOpera. ;;>.>). As such, there’s an itty, bitty, current of lightheartedness that seems to flow throughout the story--courtesy of Axel most of the time--that I love. But then I also love how everything keeps getting worse and worse for Riku . . . and the whole fighting how bisexual he is . . . . and the make up . . .

    Oh! And I think writing this from Riku’s P.O.V. is insanely wonderful. I adore being inside his head, hearing him damn himself, and blame Axel for his non-heterosexual thoughts. But I also like how Riku and Sora are both slllooooooooowwwlly coming to understand each other. You’re not moving too fast, and I like how this isn’t just blind hate on Riku’s part--as less with Sora. It’s interesting that he can be so rational one minute, then completely emotional the next, then so utterly confused after that.

    So yeah, this is a cute little idea, and I really like your humor-filled execution of the story.

    But if you don’t have a beta/proofreader, you might want to look into one. (Even if you wait until after you’ve finished the story to do so . . . .

    See ya next time!
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  • From on August 01, 2007
    lol "hanging" out :D can't wait to read that. :3 heh heh, I can get passed the make-up cuz this was such a well awaited chapter. :] I almost thought that it would be one of the parents taking that picture XD Axel's fantasy? geez! seriously, you're hilarious! Poor Riku, you're in denial! of course ur gay! :P thanks for writing!
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  • From Cave on July 30, 2007
    LJ slash comms, ftw!

    Funny chapter~ Riku with eye make-up must be very pretty. ^^
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