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Reviews for Adventures of Sora

By : Lonelysoul02
  • From ANON - generic fan on August 30, 2009
    You know,in the many pages of fanfics I have to trudge through, this is the first Sora centric story I read that doesn't suck at all.

    It's verry good! Only thing would be to grammer check your chapters a bit more, as far as sentance structure goes. (A good beta reader could help you there.)

    But that's not such a big problem. This thing is overwhelmingly good, I say.
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  • From ANON - Some guy on December 02, 2007
    Well, I think that Nightmare could be a very...intresting chapter. What I really can't wait to see is when Sora goes to Hallow Bastion the second time. I mean six (five if Belle is off with the Beast) women, all alone with a horny boy in a castle. That's just about the only time in KH1 that Sora would be able to "have fun" with Jassmine, since as you stated before, she was taken off her home world before anything could happen. Also, Sora will have to have Aerial teach him how to make love under water...
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  • From kerrde06 on September 06, 2007
    I absolutely love this story and hope you eventually start to write it again. I also vote to have Aerith become pregnant.
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  • From Dreamfool on August 08, 2007
    I read your profile and I'd love to bounce idea's back and forth with you. E-mail me at Heyashleyjude@AOL.com
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  • From Bishonen on August 05, 2007
    Nightmare Before Christmas amv

    http://www.veoh.com/videos/v654018Hmf8YwtP?searchId=2834543354307067996&rank=0

    Posted only because it's so fucking funny

    With Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From kamiyoni on August 05, 2007
    i think all this disscusion over Aerith is pointless. her having a kid with sora is the is what you decided to do, so go with it. stop voting over it already!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2007
    NONONONONONONONO! No nightmare! (brings out spray bottle) bad author! (squirts) Go with wendy, then do kairi. and aerith should not get preg. it would crush kairi. tell me, are you going to do the gullwongs, yuna, rikku and paine?




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  • From kamiyoni on August 04, 2007
    and yet nobody has thought to mention Larxene?
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  • From DemonicKnight on August 04, 2007
    I'll most likely hate myself for this but I vote Nightmare before Christmas.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    I think when you do Hallow Bastion you should write a lemon for the other six Princesses other then Kairi.

    Is there going to be a part 2, you know for KHII? Becuase if you do you should start with Roxas and Namine. And when you get to the Hallow Bastion, you should have a Sora/Tifa/Yuffie/Aerith one!

    Super so far!

    Can't wait for more

    Don't do Nightmare, that's technically nercorphillia. And that's wrong in many ways.

    But go ahead with Wendy
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  • From Bishonen on August 02, 2007
    I think you should do the Nightmare Before Christmas chapter because thats way better than Nala besides that wouldnt be much different than Corpse Bride which has some great fics about Emily oh and one thing you should throw in some foot fetish stuff.

    With Love,Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    I don't think you should do Nightmare Before Christmas.

    But you could do Peter Pan.

    And when you do Hallow Bastion all seven princess, seven lemons.

    Wait, will you do Namine in the end? Since she's the only 'real' person, since the rest are memories at Oblivion and it would save time just putting her in the same story then in a seperate on

    When you do the second part will you repeat anyone?

    Because I know you'll do Ollete, Tifa, Meg, Mulan and Elizibeth. Maybe Nala, but that'd be odd.
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  • From ANON - a random reader on August 01, 2007
    go for the nightmare! This story rocks!
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  • From Bishonen on July 19, 2007
    Already read the frist post of this heres my e-mail bishonen20@hotmail.com dont think i can be much help with het but if you want i'll do anything i can

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae

    I sign every review like that
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  • From Bishonen on July 18, 2007
    I like yuri a lot more but this was a good het i would love to see the aerial chapter I love mermaids.

    With Love; Imauky Lomae

    P.s thats how i sign every review
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