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Reviews for Adventures of Sora

By : Lonelysoul02
  • From kamiyoni on July 10, 2007
    hey glad to see your return. i had been waiting a while for this story to be updated. perhaps if you interested you can check out my challenges. but about the fic now. every chapter is really well done. and i always did think that Aeris/Aerith would make a good mother.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2007
    more chapters please. This is one of the best kingdom hearts stories out there. I gotta have more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2007
    When we getting more chapters? This is a great story.
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  • From ANON - Rose on December 31, 2006
    I hope you update as soon as you can please maby areith should have a baby by sora or yuffie should have sora's baby anyway have a nice day. :D
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  • From ANON - anon on December 12, 2006
    Morbo is pleased.... lol i think you should stick with the theme of the woman in control. its seems more fun that way. gota love Straight shota! seirously though "woman in control"
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  • From ANON - ???? on December 06, 2006
    when you gonna continue? I cant wait to see sally.
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  • From ANON - Pwin on November 11, 2006
    Finally, a kingdom hearts fanfic that isn't Yaoi. ;)

    but you use waaaaay too many of the same words. You used as much too many times, and in places you didn't need to.
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  • From ANON - Eternal Nightmare on October 29, 2006
    Well i just found this story while looking and i have to say it is quite amazing. I am sorry to hear about your fiance, i hope things go ok. Anyway, i can't wait to see this story continued. I would definatly consider heading into Kingdom Hearts 2 territory, considering there is not only more women but more information to use in writing. Unfortunatly since i haven't played the first one in awhile...i can't really vote on the next girl. As for Aerith getting pregnant...sure why not, i mean it is fiction...fun to read. One thing i've noticed is that the girls seem urgently in need for sora...which isn't a bad thing, i would like to suggest trying a more aggressive sora with someone who isn't dying to touch him, basically switching around...sora the one in control, and the girl the one who 1.) trying to get over shock, and 2.) Deciding to play long...basically a switch of chapter one. And adding some bondage wouldn't be a horrible thing, but either way i look forward to another chapter.
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  • From kamiyoni on October 27, 2006
    please continue this fic there needs to be more Sora/female fic on this site. i have to say you got some intresting ideas here, i always did think Aerith/Aeris would make a good mother. maybe later on you could have a chapter with Larxene/Sora. i dont know how your gonna get the next chapter to work though i mean shes a mermaid right? i don't think they do... that, or were you gonna have some magic thing happen, or are gonna be weird(i mean in that in a good way mind you) and have her and Sora do ...that SPAWNing thing that fish do?LOL
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  • From ANON - ??? on October 20, 2006
    Do Ariel next, please. Or Sally in Halloween Town (but that'd be sorta weird). Do you think you could also do people from Chain of Memories and Kingdom Hearts 2?
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  • From ANON - Lonerwolf on October 16, 2006
    Sorry to hear about that. But this fic is awsome so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2006
    nice work keep it up
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  • From ANON - X on September 27, 2006
    Another great chapter. Very well written.
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  • From NecroQueen on September 23, 2006
    I've talked to Zanku and he told me to tell everyone that he's sorry for the delay, and he'll be posting another chapter in a few days.
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  • From ANON - X on September 19, 2006
    This is a really great story. I look forward to more.
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