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Reviews for Lilium

By : Halamee2559
  • From Omega on March 10, 2008
    O.o....

    That. Was frigging hot. Update soon, okay?
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  • From ANON - Hellish Hedley on March 10, 2008
    Wow, that was simply amazing. You really did Hitomi justice in this chapter. Everything you wrote was so descriptive and your grasp of vocabulary was impressive. I can't wait to see what the odd tatoo that formed on her was. The wait was sure worth it. I can't wait until you start your third chapter with Kasumi and might I recommend Kokoro for Lilium's next victim?
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  • From limo300x on October 23, 2007
    Hey, just wondering if you were still planning on continuing this story. If not, mind if I take my hand at it, kind of like what you did with the original author? i was actually planning a while ago to make a story just like this, with crossovers out the ass, but I didn't want to completely plagarize him and you, so when I saw what you had already written, I decided not to. Let me know!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2007
    Awesome story, and I can't wait for more!

    You've GOT to do Christie next!
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  • From Hyboria on October 07, 2007
    Hi very nice story, I enjoyed reading it very much. I would say that Lisa should be the next victim. I also have some Ideas and suggestions, would you be so kind to add an email address to your profile, as I would like to discuss a few of my ideas with you.

    If you want you could also drop me a mail and i'd get back to you with my idea. My e-mail dress is palmbi@hotmail.co.uk hope to hear from you soon.

    Thnaks again for a fantastic story (First Chapter).
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  • From Dopo on September 20, 2007
    WoW This was really a HOt story!!! I vote that the next chapter is done on Lisa.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2007
    Pick Hitomi next
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2007
    Nice. I'd like to see kasumi show up next.
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  • From Warriorking4ever on August 01, 2007
    I loved it even more the second time I read it and I seriously hope you add a few more chpts in the near future! I still hope that Ayane appears in chpt two, and that she undergoes some kind of body modification as a result of the lust inducing virus (such as breast expansion). If so, I would suggest you have her go horny at a beach in her skimpiest swimsuit surrounded by loads of perverted guys. The virus makes her grow so horny that she can't help sucking each and every guy off in order to ingest their cum (maybe she experinces belly growth or body inflation from being overfilled with cum as the story progresses). Hell, you could even have her and Kasumi in the same chpt when the virus hits them both...Maybe they were playing a VERY heated game of volleyball, or perhaps were about to duel before suddenly being overwhelmed by lust. How hot would that be? Ayane and Kasumi engaging in a cock sucking contest to see which of them can ingest the must cum before reaching their breaking points (and of course, they swell up as they force themselves to swallow unnaturally large loads of sperm from every guy at the beach). Its your story of course, I'm just a fan telling you what I would like to see, but in the end its all up to you, but I do hope my crazy rambling at least helps your own creative juices (good luck! I'm sure your next chpt will be even better than chpt one!)
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  • From ANON - Anonymous Everyman on July 26, 2007
    Please completely fill Hitmoi's womb full of cum and completely saturate her in semen.
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  • From ANON - Warriorking4ever on July 26, 2007
    AWESOME STORYLINE! Tina was very hot in this story and I like how you came up with the Lilium virus to explain her crazy arousal and willingness to be with the guys who injected her. ten stars! I personally would like to see you use the lilium drug on Ayane next (she's the hottest girl of all in my opinion, best figure anyway, lol). Unless of course you are planning on having her be the mastermind behind the virus, as a means of getting revenge on Kasumi (maybe Tina was a test run, lol). Nah, I bet its Zack again, lol, that perv. Anywho, I'd love to say Ayane get into this, bu look forward to whoever you choose next. Oh yeah, its your story and all, but I was thinking it would spice things up if the Lilium had other side effects besides increased lust, like maybe it causes girls to experience sudden growth in the chest and ass areas if you know what I mean? lol, breast expansion is always hot, especially when the girl is already ultra busty like Ayane. Or maybe the lilium virus turns the girls into cum hungry nymphos who can't stop drinking guys semen even when if their bodies are stuffed to the brink of bursting (mmmmm, would love to read a chpt about Ayane sucking off all the guys at a beach until her sexy, perfect ninja body which she is so proud of ends up bloated with cum). anywho, these are all just kinky suggestions, brought on by the awesomeness of your story, lol. Good luck with whatever you decide to do, and thankyou if you decide to do Ayane next or incorporate any of my naughty ideas into the story (highly recommend the BE and cum stuffing ideas)
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  • From ANON - Titan on July 25, 2007
    I would suggest Hitomi
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  • From ANON - soudo on July 22, 2007
    Hitomi needs a good long fuck.
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  • From ANON - FunkyD on July 20, 2007
    Nice, nice.

    How about you do Kasumi next. More specifically, Kasumi getting tag-teamed by say, Ayane and Christie? Like have Christie and Ayane with Kasumi as an unwilling participant (i.e.: lesbian rape. Ayane wants to make Kasumi suffer and Christie's just along for the ride, or something like that) Lots of strap-on action, anal, tit-biting, shit like that.

    So basicly they savagely fuck Kasumi for several hours until she just passes out, and then maybe for a little bit afterward. Then maybe the "Lilium" gets introduced somehow and they fuck each other.

    How's that sound? Not too graphic an idea, is it?
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  • From ANON - Vinay on July 20, 2007
    I vote for Kasumi or Ayane, by the way.
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