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Reviews for Suikoden V - Secrets under the Sun

By : Streti
  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2007
    Please, Streti! Update!
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  • From ANON - eager reader on August 28, 2007
    Streti, I can't wait for chapter 4! You are an incredible author!
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  • From Streti on August 15, 2007
    Thanks for the encouraging reviews, everyone. They really do help to keep me inspired. I wouldn't mind a small footnote in the history of adult fiction...

    Hehe, Ghost, am I getting that predictable? But hopefully there are still a few surprises left in the story. Marina and Belcoot won't be one of them unfortunately, the story is already pretty much set. Nice to hear detailed reviews too, in this and "Sunlite"!
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  • From ANON - ghost of on August 15, 2007
    Ah! Excellent piece so far! At first it was abit difficult to imagine Rahal and Fuyo as a loving couple but the first chapter is very convincing in that matter. Same goes for Roog and Lun. I do however have a feeling that both couples will be mixed into a three- or foursome eventually. Fuyo's apparent curiosity and excitement towards the eventual onlookers will be very interesting to follow. I wouldn't mind seeing her taking care of more than two cocks at a time in a later chapter. Also perhaps Lun could finally get both her precious dragon knights at the same time, as long as Subala will let Lun out of her grasp that is.

    Jeane's through-the-robe-handjob is incredibly hot and even though she has already gotten alot of spunk from Lorelai her urge for more will probably never subside... I bet that whenever she has finished everyone off she would probably milk her own member dry. With all those hemaphrodites you can set up quite many interesting combinations.

    Another idea came to my mind. What if the voices that Fuyo and Rahal are hearing actually comes from another party hiding in the bushes on the opposite side of where Lun, Roog and the others are? When reading you're expecting it to be them but it's never really mentioned or proved, right? Perhaps they could find another lovemaking couple in Marina and Belcoot. The two voluptuous women would probably make both men even hornier. Only a suggestion.
    Love your stories, please continue!
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  • From DrkLazarus on August 06, 2007
    Holy shit. One of my favorite fetishes, in excess.

    You are my God, now and forever. You keep writing, and I'll carve your name into the history texts *myself*!
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  • From ANON - blah blah on July 24, 2007
    Wow. Streti, you are incredible. I love the wording, the imagery, and the characters. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Omaesan on July 19, 2007
    I'm going to review Suiko5 characters. I think you should add one or two more. Or a change of scenery. Put that voyeur and exhibitionist game in other places
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