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Reviews for The Call of the Dark

By : Brandon
  • From johnjordan on October 09, 2011
    Good chap! it looks like Xion is the monkey wrench NO ONE was expecting. Hope she can stop them once and for all.
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  • From ANON - gorm on May 07, 2010
    interestring can you have Xenia muttering angrily that she knows who the traitor is and knows their only one way to take care of it (Killing namine since she may have had a hand in Xion ressurection as Xion began systematically knocking out each member)
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  • From ANON - gorm on May 07, 2010
    Is that, Xion, YES! hmm perhaps veruca and the nother one is remembering xion since shhe came back to existance.
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  • From Iyasu on April 22, 2010
    I was pretty surprised to see that this had an update after so long, so I decided to check it out. Nice chapter, and glad to see that it's not a dormant fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Shire Folk on April 13, 2010
    Wow. That sure was a surprising ending to a long-awaited chapter. I rather like the way that this appears to be going. Kairi isn't nowhere near as broken as Loshul thinks she is, especially after the encounter she had within her own heart. I wonder if she'd taken acting in school or was in some kind of drama or theatre club before she had been captured, because Kairi looks to me like a young woman (a naked young woman mind you) with a plan and not just a simple sex slave. I wonder what will happen when Kairi and Namine meet each other though. Likely there will be talk and scheming for Kairi to get out and back to the Islands, and the red-head will likely try at the start to convince Namine to come back with her, but I'm pretty sure that it will end up with steamy sex between them.
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  • From ANON - crabtron on June 26, 2009
    this is good can you have Xion be mentioned? btw i want to see kairi get more anal by another girl
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  • From ANON - Shire Folk on May 31, 2009
    Wow. I loved this chapter so much it is hard to describe. The dealings of the different members of the Company, their trust and distrust for one another; Kairi's internal struggle between the Light of Good and Purity, and the Darkness of Sin, Malice, and Lust. Simply astounding and a perfect additional chapter.

    I wonder where the Keyblade went off to? Possibly Namine? Then again, what is going on with Namine? I hope that she will be able to resist and come back in time, and that Sora (since I am pretty sure that Sora snuck into Damian's ship) will be able to rescue them. I also have a feeling that the new girl that arrived is Selphie, but I'm only about 72% confident about that.

    May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

    Shire Folk
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  • From ANON - Shire Folk on January 30, 2009
    I absolutely have to say that after reading the first six chapters of your story, I want more. It's great, probably the best KH lemon story I've ever seen that would actually have a plot to it. It's both the sex and the plot that keep me going. From what I can tell, Sora has managed to stow away on Ameys' ship, and soon may be searching for Kairi. It somewhat saddens me that Kairi has now given in, and it looks as if Namine will soon be on the verge of breaking too, but it also delights me because there will now be more lemon scenes for them. The favourite line I can think of is in chapter four when Kairi thinks *Oh hell, what have I become?*

    I seriously want to know how this unfolds, and I hope that you update soon.

    May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

    Shire Folk

    P.S. I'm using my penname from the regular ff site if you want to PM me or anything.
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  • From johnordan on January 29, 2009
    i imagine Loshul to be angry with Veruca knowing that a bit of Kairi heart has connected to Veruca but inwardly he please since he view Veruca as a piece he can't properly control but thanks to kairi he gets two toys for the price of one

    and i imagine Yvvete to at first hide Namine but a now anger Syrus demands to know where that nobody is so he can help Veruca

    you like?
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  • From ANON - Heather on October 28, 2008
    This is a really good story. It's very discriptive, and the discriptions are well written. This story hasn't been updated in awhile, I hope it will be soon though! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Michael Johnson on May 25, 2008
    Chapter 2, I laughed at the part when She said, "I didn't so they wouldn't fuck me!" "When did we make that arrangement."
    Humouris, The Mummy Returns was a good movie.
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  • From xCrimsonButterflyx on May 04, 2008
    noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! it cant finish there i must have morreeee!!! ARRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!! lol sorry uhhh please write more soon? it was really really good ^^
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  • From ANON - crokonyte on March 27, 2008
    i love it, the Drama, the action, the whole she-bang.

    btw can you have Yvette have her way Namine and made it appear to the others that she killed her, but kept her as her own pet.
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  • From ANON - Sammie on January 24, 2008
    I wait impatiently for the next chapter to be added I hope its up soon! Please send me an email!!!
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  • From ANON - Sammie on January 04, 2008
    I loved it. I hope you can put up a new chapter please if you can email me when you update
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