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Reviews for Leon May Cry

By : Slayne
  • From Asylus on November 02, 2007
    BOO-FREAKIN'-HOO!
    I am enraged!
    How dare Mr."Big Cheese" leave Dante all alone!!!!
    Damn him to the deepest recesses of hell!!!!!
    you's funneh, CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - swordgirl101 on November 01, 2007
    You should definitely continue it.
    I admit the style is slighting confusing but I think it works, and you're pretty much saying half the stuff I think when playing the game (I've been through the game about 8 times and unlocked everything twice; just a wee bit obsessed) so it's all good.
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  • From alleycat88 on October 23, 2007
    Hahaha yeah ur fic is pretty funny! I'm sooo glad you updated! YAY! Please update again!
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  • From ANON - Fran on October 22, 2007
    hey, will you keep writing it? I'm really looking forward to an update. Great fic
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  • From wanderingaddict on September 30, 2007
    haha, what a fun story. I hope you write more! I wanna see what happens to leon next.
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  • From anacsadder on September 18, 2007
    Yeah, I'm going to have to agree with A Nonymouse. Maybe I don't understand the effect that you were going for, but the interjections from the author in chapter 2 were a little distracting. Like when you talk about watching Leon's hips next time you have him move something. It's... a little like sprinkling Author Notes into the story itself. I'm not trying to flame, but you said you wanted critiquing...
    The present tense is interesting. I don't see many fics that do that. There are one or two places were you slip into past tense. I should have picked a specific example, because the part where you're talking about Dante's memories (or something like that) in chapter one works with the past tense. However, there were still one or two places where it seemed like it was an oversight or a typo. I don't know if that makes sense, but keep tense in mind. I have the same problem if I try to write in present tense.
    I agree, you are doing so much better than some other writers I've seen in the paragraph department. Keep that up =)
    The story is a good idea. I like pairings where the two characters involved have a love/hate relationship. I bet as feisty as Leon is, he's going to be the bottom, though, huh? Poor Leon... but his feistiness makes him such a cute bottom...
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  • From ANON - Ganadosaurus X on September 11, 2007
    Pretty awsome writing style! Poor Dante..
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  • From ANON - A nonymouse on September 10, 2007
    I really like this story, so please continue it *_*;

    Umm when I was reading it Chapter 1 seemed a lot mmore structured than Chapter 2 for some reason. o.o maybe too many breaks in chappie 2 with all the "GO LEON, GO!" and "Okay Dante you better stop before he laughs at you." stuff, I think...
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  • From Radius on September 04, 2007
    *__* Tee hee, Resident Evil's Leon *AND* Devil May Cry's Dante! Have I died and gone to heaven??? Good thing I checked out the 'Latest' panel. I'm a huuuuuuuge fan of Dante, you see, and I'm pretty fed up with him being hooked up with the same-o-same-o people. I always thought Leon was a hottie and now to see a fanfic writer actually have him *with* my favorite babe in the universe??? O__O Oooh, this was certainly a nice surprise!

    Please write more! I just love how the action starts and the tremendous comic relief Dante provides. I think he goes well with the serious/intense Leon. It's an interesting combination and I hope to see more of it in the future chapters. That chainsaw part of the story was also hilarious, where Dante is like 'whatever.'

    Hee hee, I draw so now I have an excuse to do some Dante/Leon stuff. ^_^ I'll be sure to send you it if I ever find the time to do some fanart (sighs and cries at the school workload piling up on the desk)
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  • From ANON - swordgirl101 on September 03, 2007
    Well, first off I like it and I think you should definitely finish it. For one thing it isn't a crossover I've seen before, although now that I think about it I can't imagine why (they'd be quite pretty together). Now I'm not much of a writer so I can't really say anything there, except that I was able to enjoy the story without being caught up in spelling and grammatical errors which is surprisingly rare sometimes. Plus you use paragraphs, which is awesome.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2007
    I love the story so far.

    Devil May Cry and Resident Evil 4 are my favorite games.

    The pairing is very interesting. Keep it up and post more. :]
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