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Reviews for Changing of the guard

By : Dragonvamp
  • From NekoDemon on February 08, 2008
    sounds intreging. i will await an update. hope it will be soon.

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  • From Radius on September 10, 2007
    I haven't seen Buffy in a long time but I gotta say, you handle what I remember from the show really well! Just from the get-go the story feels like an episode straight from the series. It's great that Dante just fits in seamlessly. I've read many crossover stories and they all felt like crossovers. This one doesn't, it has a real nice flow. Awesome job in that department. ^_^ I love the mystery too and had a riot hearing Willow babble on and on and on. Very in character there. Dante sounds real mature but, hey, he raised a kid so it comes with the territory. I can really see Dante grow into this type of man in the future (kinda like a nod to Sparda). It's really convincing and it's great how Dante is both modest but also direct. Super job.

    If you decide to write future chapters, it'd be great to sorta introduce the Buffy cast. It was real clever of you to describe Dante's story. It helps Buffy fans know who this guy is if they haven't played the game. On the other hand, there's not much background from the Buffy cast so it'd be cool if you could kinda tap into their histories a little here and there so ppl who haven't seen the show (or who haven't seen it for a long time like me) don't get lost. *sighs* It's just one of the unfortunate things about crossovers. I thought I'd bring this up because this story really kicks ass so far and this little suggestion would just push this already 'A' class story into a 'A+' category.

    Anywho, lovely story and pace! Very sweet stuff this is. ^_^
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