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Reviews for Untitled Threesome fic

By : LotornoMiko
  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2012
    this is great, although i dont like the parts w/lezard, but lenneth and mystina is my otp
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2009
    This was awesome, you just made me a Mystina-Lenneth shipper.
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  • From Rezalda on October 12, 2007
    Full of awesome and win. That was incredibly hot. Both Mysty and Lenneth were very much in character. I also loved the rivalry that existed between Lezard and Mystina--the "She is mine!" was great, especially since in your other fics it's always Lezard who says something along those lines. :) That was a good, and very much needed, jab to his ego.

    Thought I'd point something out, though. It's in this sentence:

    "She licked her collarbone, kisses going lower, planting them in reverent fervor down the slop of the blonde's chest."

    I know you meant "slope," but it threw me off for a second. :p It's all good, though.

    All in all, very sexy and fun to read. Bonus points for masturbating Lezard, which I love!

    ~Celia
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