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Reviews for Relief of Stress

By : KingSplooge111
  • From bloodyqueen on February 11, 2009
    Okay...um, how should I say this?

    Listen, I loved your story, it was really good, but that crap-eating part...
    Way too much! I mean, why would they do that? Don't think I am being mean, I love your story it's just
    the crap part was too much. Keep up the great work!

    Princess darkblood
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  • From ANON - QJD on April 29, 2008
    No wonder you dont have a girlfriend, Tails. Taking it up the ass from another man has a tendency to drive woman away
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  • From ANON - matty on January 20, 2008
    k...so that was...well written I suppose..then Tails, took a shit in Sonics mouth, hmm. The last 3rd of that story scared and repulsed me. What. The Fuck? Good writer, probably a wierd, wierd, possibley deranged person.
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  • From Satine on December 27, 2007
    Hallo mate,

    I thought I'd take you up on your forum request for more reviews.

    It's an interesting story on several levels. You're quite descriptive, telling your reader what the surroundings and setting look like, the mood of your characters and so on, which always goes down well with me at least.

    I think there's just a couple of things I'm not too keen on with the fic, but I hope you'll see this simply as constructive criticism because I think your story is generally written well.

    - the whole homosexuality thing with Sonic, Tails, and other prominent characters can be done well, or badly. I think it can either work really well as an alternative way of looking at some very macho characters, or it can be a cheap shock tactic. I'm genuinely unsure of which you've gone for, but the idea that Tails, as a virgin, would immediately turn gay when he's already said he's disappointed at not having a girlfriend doesn't quite fit. I think he'd be a bit unsure. He acts more experienced than I'd guessed he is.

    - Tails, again, seems too sure of what he wants for a virgin (I know you didn't say he was, but the context you put the story in suggests he is). Especially given that he knows how to pose on all fours (the arching of back) in preparation for anal sex. To me, if you've not done it before you need a bit more guidance, but maybe that's just me.

    - Something else you see in most slash fanfics is Sonic having a huge willy. Now, I know there's a nice fantasy element with that, especially if you're a bloke, but I'd like to see it written a bit more often that he's not that well-endowed and a bit more emphasis on his skill as a lover. Or lack thereof, whichever suits the story. I think the idea of having a big cock tends to be a substitute for being a good lover, whereas I'll say from experience that size isn't an indicator of quality.

    All that said, the story works nicely as its own oneshot, it's a good 'nutshell' story. Because of the descriptive approach you've taken to the story that poo bit leaves too much of a taste in my mouth, no pun intended, but if you were looking to shock then it certainly works!

    The injury Tails sustains sounds bloody painful, too. I don't think anybody could carry on with such an injury... were you using poetic license to intensify the scene or do you reckon anyone can take that level of agony?

    By the way, I've posted a request for reviews on the forum too, so if you'd be so kind..?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2007
    oh hai..i see what you did there. ;)
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  • From ANON - Ryuu on November 09, 2007
    What the fuck?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2007
    i've ... i've created a monster

    it wasn't supposed to be this way - it could have been a great big orgy fic, a thing of beauty

    what have I /done/
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  • From ANON - anon on October 26, 2007
    "Eggman fucking a baby? Not such a bad idea. I could involve a blowtorch and a few razor dildoes, and perhaps a smattering of watersports-domination. I know! He could fuck Cream! Thanks for the idea. Stay tuned for my next fic :-)"

    fair enough

    just not scat, that's just shit
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  • From KingSplooge111 on October 20, 2007
    Eggman fucking a baby? Not such a bad idea. I could involve a blowtorch and a few razor dildoes, and perhaps a smattering of watersports-domination. I know! He could fuck Cream! Thanks for the idea. Stay tuned for my next fic :-)
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  • From AmethystTB on October 20, 2007
    My mind is scarred...for life
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2007
    rape, shit, rape, angst, rape, what else lies in store for the Sonic the Hedgehog category? Eggman fucking a baby? Vanilla hardcore BDSM? Amy Rose DVDA?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2007
    ahahahaha oh god auuugh blaaargh *tears out eyeballs*
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  • From Samantha1984 on October 16, 2007
    I'm sorry, but I was really likng this story until all the shit eating. That was really disgusting and it turned me away from reading that rest of the story. I don't know if eating somebody waste is how you make love in real life, but that was terrible.
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  • From Madamdragon on October 16, 2007
    the poo stuff is a bit much. But in all it was cute! I hope there's another update soon...
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