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Reviews for Connor and the Traitor

By : sexykitkat
  • From elegyenigma on November 13, 2007
    ...Eh. It was ok. Refraining from my Star-Trek Nerd equivelant of being a Halo Geek myself, and therefore sparing the reasons why humans couldn't really turn 'traitor' to the covenant, I'll instead stick to being 'pompous author/editor/literature critic.' It was, context-wise, boring. The plot was about as deep as the kiddy pool and the colorful emotional ranges of the characters started from gray and ended at off-white. I think the attempt of the story was to redeem itself with the sex scene but even then it seemed like one of those porn movies that's so poorly written and acted out that you can't even get a hard-on over it. The whole "oh please don't rape me- oooo now I'm loving this!" thing is SO overplayed that it isn't even funny anymore. Add the spotty capitalization and pitiful lack of punctuation and you have a story that is BEST described as mediocre. Sorry to say but I vote it a 1/5. That is NOT to say that you should stop writing, but it IS to say you need improvement.
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