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Reviews for Here Without You

By : angrymuffin
  • From insantics on December 17, 2007
    I really liked this story. I normally don't read angst, but I kind of figured that this wasn't going to be as hardcore as a lot of the stuff that's out there... Not to say you didn't do a good job! I really felt Riku's heart breaking, but the light at the end of the tunnel, the fact that they'll always be friends... That was touching. I was sad to see Sora having a crush on Kairi, but, you know, I suppose it is canon and all! ^_^

    Good job, and I hope to see more from you. Do you have an ff.net account too? Erm... don't answer that. I'll just look myself.

    Adios!
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  • From HappyDragon on November 11, 2007
    Rawr :3

    Only real minor stuffs with grammar. I think you forgot an "into" when mentioning that Sora's hair would sometimes fall into/cover his eyes.

    Other than that, not a bad opening drabble.

    Good Luck!
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