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Reviews for A Fairy's Wish

By : surtur
  • From kyubiman on July 09, 2009
    So... what does Navi look like?
    keep going
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  • From thedragongly on December 28, 2008
    Aww, that was cute! I enjoyed it, and you took what could possibly have been a long story and shortened it with excellent skill. Your words and actions flowed nicely. Happy writing!
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  • From ericblaire on December 11, 2008
    Thanks for the review. Your opinion's definitely worth something.

    On another note, are you planning on continuing this one? It's sweet. Creative without becoming totally unplausable.

    I in turn encourage you to continue. If you do, I'll definitely be looking forward to it :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2008
    This story is very good so far. Continue to update. I want to see what Link and Navi do next.
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  • From Fairycat on February 19, 2008
    Cute story. I hope you finish it soon.
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  • From KibaInuzukaSan on December 27, 2007
    This story is very well written and easily understandable. It seems you grasped about as much of both charaters anyone could assume or gather from their interactions during OoT. I, personally, am hoping to see another well done chapter soon. Good luck!
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  • From JustS on December 25, 2007
    I'm really liking this so far. Your writing style is very good, and having a sequel to the N64 Zeldas without an overblown story or a load of indiscriminate sex could turn out to be very cool. I think the story is genuinley quite sweet and tender so far, which is something you don't often see in AFFs.

    A few constructive criticisms I would like to impart if I may:
    a) a little bit of description about Navi's appearance would be nice, I mean, fairies are only circles of light in the N64 Zelda's. You could be leaving it up to the reader's imagination of course, which I respect if you've chosen to do that intentionally, but as I said, it would be nice to have a little idea of your vision of her (right now I'm imagining a Tinkerbell-type look).
    b) Perhaps she and Link got together a bit quickly? I thought perhaps they would have the awkward massage moment then shrug it off, and then perhaps later in the dungeon when one of their lives are endangered (perhaps by the boss) that they'd decide to act on their feelings then. That's just my opinion, but I think it would come off less rushed (I mean the evolution of their relationship, not the writing) and leave the reader in suspense a bit longer.

    Anyway, hope that feedback was of some use to you, I will be keeping an eye on this one!
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  • From SammyD on December 23, 2007
    Dude, you are awesome!!! I love it!!!! I soo can't wait for more!!!
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  • From BrightShadow on November 14, 2007
    For a first outing, this is certainly looking to be good. Like Nunatak said, it is rather direct, but in the case of a prologue chapter, it doesn't hit too hard. You've definitely piqued my interests, for what that's worth. Do continue, please!
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  • From MissingLink88 on November 13, 2007
    Hm, this could be interesting. 's been a while since a a fic in the Zelda section caught my attention. Your writing style was a bit direct in this one.. I kind of felt like there were certain things you wanted to note and the transition between those was a bit visible. Descriptions were ok though. I'll check back to this one from time to time - so keep up the good work! ^_^
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  • From SammyD on November 13, 2007
    More!!! More!!! Please I must read more!!!
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