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Reviews for Made For Each Other

By : Kamui
  • From vix135a on January 04, 2009
    This was well written! I don't want to give away any of the plot in case someone did not read it but i did like the way you did their first love scene. It was humorous and you felt that you were Alia making love to X for the first time. By the way thank you for not making X and Zero in yaoi form. I like only M/F fics. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From RockgirlX on April 03, 2008
    I loved this fic! There aren't many X/Alia fics out there and the ones that I have read were not that good in my opinion, but yours just blew me away!! The best X/Alia fic I have EVER read! Nice job! Well written, romantic, and great action scenes!

    Here's hoping for a sequel with the honeymoon and the cute bathroom jakoozie tub! ;)

    Good work!
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  • From MoonlightSilver on December 09, 2007
    Excellent job. I don't read Hetero as much, but you made this wonderfully. =)
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  • From OmegaX on November 29, 2007
    I don't believe that there was anything that the earlier review said that I can add upon, or disagree upon at all, Truly a perfect Het fic, in all versions of the term. A great, non sexual build up, a buildup that draws the reader in, and the sex scene, which was perfectly done.


    The only flaw, What took you so long? This is the perfect example of great Het writing.


    Keep up the great work, hope to see more at some point

    Anonelbe

    P.S. Hetero, I believe he was referring to my review on your "Request Thread for Het/Yuri Fics"
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  • From HeteroHunter417 on November 27, 2007
    Praying Mantis, you are as of now on my watch list, and THAT is a compliment ^_^. I am not sure if the request you speak of is from me, (I've never set up a request, but I have noted that X and Alia are one of my fav. couples), but for the person who requested it, THEY ARE VERY LUCKY FOR YOU TO HAVE WRITTEN THIS!

    I absolutely loved this story! Your style of writing is exactly the type I look for in lemons, some kind of story that drives the couple together and an excellent sex scene!

    I apologize if I sound like I'm flaunting myself, but I feel like I'm reading one of my own works. This style is very similar to the one I write, but it feels MUCH more refined and ten times better than my own capability. I will admit, I had my doubts about this at first (I skimmed this earlier because I had stuff to do), but after reading this, I'm VERY glad my doubts were proven wrong!

    All the elements you've incorporated into this was amazing. Command Mission characters (although her name isn' 'Anna', it's 'Nana'), Palette and Layer, the proof that you know your history (It's certainly a plus in my book), and even Dynamo (It's cool to see him come back, even though I don't particularly like him...) The way you characterized everyone was very believable and understandable, including,

    1. Dynamo and Debbie (I was surprised to see Dynamo married to someone, but you characterized it very well that I was in touch with it instantly)
    2. Marino and Cinnamon (The relationship between them here is especially well done. Marino showing some more of her character, and also having Cinnamon be the same old naive nurse as usual)

    However, the REAL icing on the cake was the sex. Your idea was absolutely mind-blowing and extremely creative! You incorporated an idea that is very believable and viable for reploids. If you've read my work, I made the ability to have sex for reploids actually 'built in' for them, just that it worked differently for the lucky lovers (or three). However, because for reploids (at least to my belief), sex isn't necessary, I found this idea much more creative than my own, and really loved the way you executed it.

    FINALLY, the characterization of X and Alia having their first round of sex was excellent. They truly acted like beginners and people who have never even HEARD about sex or 'reproduction' amongst humans. The reactions to them finding their own 'human' bodies was something I also loved in this, especially since it built further on the 'new to sex' game. EXCELLENT WORK!

    I apologize for rambling, but this just shows how much I loved this. Please write more! I don't care if it's another addition to this, I don't care if it's a completely new story, just WRITE MORE WHEN YOU CAN! I HAVE GREAT EXPECTATIONS OF YOU, ESPECIALLY AFTER WRITING THIS MAGNIFICENT PIECE OF WORK!

    Congrats!

    MHTT

    P.S:

    -I think the word you were looking for is 'Third person objective'. Now that you mention it though, I prefer an omniscient viewpoint, it's one I'm most comfortable with :P

    -Again, the pink haired girl's name isn't Anna, it's Nana, but that's forgivable.

    -FINALLY, I'm very happy to see another hetero fic on this site, and one that was excellently written as well!

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