Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for What Comes to Pass

By : NormaJeane
  • From RyuaAlba on February 09, 2008
    It finally occured to me to see if KOTOR had a section on this site, I was pleased to discover it did... Very nicely written, easy to read, enjoyable, too. I still prefer Atton, but that's all up to the individual.
    Report Review

  • From DarkWolves on December 04, 2007
    Sweet, please continue
    Report Review

  • From Toto on December 02, 2007
    Once again, why has no one reviewed this?!?!


    This is a wonderfully written piece, the word choice and sentence flow made it a pleasurable read. The descriptions (As with the previous fic I read.) Are incredible, nearly tangible.


    “Let go of me!” Alaia snapped, struggling against his grasp. However, that lecherous glint was behind her eyes, and the libidinous feelings that emanated from her told him his frankness excited her. She wanted his roughness, the foolhardiness which drove him to grasp her chin and mash his lips against her’s into a kiss that tore straight down his body, past his lips, chest, stomach, and straight to his groin. A low growl rolled up from his within his body, igniting the insanity, the same insanity which had taken him when he had killed that Jedi who he had so dearly loved.


    This was great bit ^^ I could almost feel what he was feeling, and I'm still getting the jitters! The everyone was IC, and Atton was hot. I wish Mical hadn't gotten in the way, that was getting me all excited for a little romp. I better be seeing some action with him *Shakes Fist*. Otherwise you are still EASILY one of my favorite authors in this section, keep on keep on...ing. I can't wait for an update, however don't forget about the Life and Death thing you got going on, because I really am intrigued.


    -Blondie
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!