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By : crymsonpassion

From angrymuffin on November 20, 2010
Ooooh boy where to start. I've noticed this story floating around for some time now, being updated here and there...but never clicked on it. Why? No idea. But I finally clicked on it yesterday, curiousty getting the better of me, and from chapter 1 yesterday, continuing on until tonight, (with the exception of sleeping and work) I complete what you have of it so far. First off, I completely adore how you portray Sora and Roxas's relationship as twins. It's probably easier for you to write, whereas you've mentioned that you have a twin, but I've never seen or read or heard of such indepth emotion that comes from having a twin. It must be amazing, and I've often wondered what it might be like to have my own twin--just to experience that special bond.

Secondly, I love how you gave all the characters some sort of disablity, and Riku being blind really fits him for some reason I can't explain. I mean, if it happens, it happens...but picturing him in a wheel chair isn't as easy as seeing him walking about expertly--like he's not even blind at all. Sora's disablity fits him, again, I don't know really know why. It's not like disablities can have a personality and someone destined to be blind, is all cocky and cool like Riku, or someone being in a wheelchair has to be sunny and sweet like Namine. I mean, look at Kairi, complete total opposite of Namine, and she's in a wheelchair too. Although again, that's because of their own personal reason. I guess it also shows that no matter where you are or when...something horrible could easily happen to you. Don't ask, haha. I have no idea where I was really going with this point...so on to the next one.

I quite appreaciate your way of slowly developing everyone's relationships. I mean, I saw the obvious ones coming a mile a way, but as I kept reading I wondered when everyone would get together, with the exception of Zexion and Demyx, of course. They were already together. I honestly didn't see Lexeaus as the one to fall for Namine. I thought it was Demyx, quite honestly, for the exact same reason as Sora did. Because he was trying to cheer her up.

One big thing I definitely want to focus on is everyone's disabilties and whether they continue into the future. The whole point of a therapy rehab clinic is so you can get better physically and mentally, right? Well, I'm sorta hoping this story ends happily--with the occasional twists you've already thrown in here and there--but with Sora coming out of paralyisis...and able to really enjoy Riku XD Roxas's arm healing (although I'm sure it was anyways) so he can cuddle Sora properly (not in Axel's terms either) and Namine and Kairi being able to walk again. Demyx's father finally succeeding in his research and getting that bullet out of Demyx's back without harming him, and of course, Riku being able to see. I have a sneaky suspicion you'll make him see though--the restoration is hinting to it. XD

Speaking of Riku's sight being restored. Those headaches aren't going to mean something horrible for Riku, I hope. Usually headaches can mean some pretty bad stuff...and again...I don't want Riku to die. Although I think the worst would be if something happened to either Sora or Roxas. I'm pretty sure I'd actually end up crying if you killed either of them off. That would be horrible.

Uh...I can't really think of too much more to say at the moment...except for one thing I just thought of. I totally think Sephiroth's 'lover' is either Vincent or Zack, and I really can't wait to find who. It wasn't really bugging me when I was reading, but now it is...and all I can say please update whenever you can. I have to know. XD

Alright, I think I'm finally going to end this ridiculously long review and say great job overall. ^^
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From animelives2000 on June 17, 2010
yays and update I`m so happy and i was all depressed about my birthday totaly sucking and this is just was the pick me up i needed ah i`m all giddy and happy because i usally dont read riku and sora fics but its like a book i just cant but down i`m such an addicet but anyway yays for the update it made the past week worth it to find the update for sucking so much i`m so giddy right now and feel like i`ve consumed way to much caffien and suger. but its really good it flows together well and doesnt have an akward break in the chapters that some fics have i love ur writeing eagerly awaiting for the next one
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From ANON - Sammi on June 12, 2010
I am now addicted to this story! I found it last night and stayed up until about 5:30 in the morning reading it. xD Keep up the good work, you've got me hooked! ^^
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From ANON - azoog on June 07, 2010
Still loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh i love the lala airlines joke that was the absolute best! Please keep updating!!!!!!!!!!1
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From animelives2000 on June 03, 2010
I absolutly love this story its the best fan fic i`ve read ever hope to see the next chapter so with an eager heart waitting for the next one
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From ANON - holly on June 03, 2010
Aww I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner :) its really awesome and I look forward to all the coming chapters. Even though I'm only on chapter 2 hehe :)
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From ANON - Ree Ree on April 27, 2010
I've read very few exceptional stories that could pull me in, and this happens to be one of them. Your vivid detail to everything going on around Sora is so incredible that I can actually visualize the world he's in. My only slight nitpick is the few and far between spelling errors, but it doesn't ruin the atmosphere at all. I meant to comment after I read the whole story, but this chapter might have inspired me to make a fanart pic... the garden scenario with Riku and Sora is so adorable... and adorably hot! X3

I shall continue reading! =3

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From ANON - azoog on April 05, 2010
I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! PLease continue my mind and wikipedia is racing with thoughts on just who sephroith's lover could possibly be!!!! Please continue to update and i'll be your bitch for life!!!!
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From ANON - Valenashti on November 25, 2009
I really must say I adore this story. It's like getting a present everytime it updates. There have been many a bad day that have been made so much better simply by sitting down and re-reading it. Thank you very much for sharing it with us all.

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From ANON - DarkAmorpheous on September 28, 2009
Ok I just have to say this because I have waited long enough, where the hell is the RikuxSora action?? 17 chapters in and just a little kissing and some slightly hot dreams from Sora but no real action and yet you have Axel and Roxas straight into bed before they even start properly dating sheesh. A long wait for another damn filler chapter, this chapter was so short >.> your summary said possible AxR, and I only started reading it because I thought it would have a good RikuxSora pairing plus it sounded interesting and I have to admit I quite liked it in the beginning but I don't feel the same passion in your writing any more, it's almost like you're getting bored of this story. Hopefully I'm wrong about that and that you will update a lot quicker and actually give me something better to digest because I gotta say this wasn't very exciting to read this time around. Just being honest here and hopefully I didn't come off too bitchy because I do rather enjoy most of your stories.

Here's hoping you won't abandon this lol and that you are well despite my being an old grouch.
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From noezel7 on July 26, 2009
Yay I finally caught up!! This story is wonderful! It's very original and I love how you let the characters interact. You having a twin also shows through the relationship that Roxas and Sora have. Consider me a now devoted fan that will follow this story till the end. Keep up the good work, sweetie!!
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From MiahTheStormWolf on July 26, 2009
I vaguely remember coming across this on ff.n, but didn't really read into it. Tell me, is that version any farther along than this one?
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From ANON - Queenaoshi on July 22, 2009
YOU'RE BACK!

Yays to the max! I missed this story. I'm so excited now. and I'm excited I get to read thirty chapters of awesome. I'm sticking with this story till the end! I also really like the Passionate Beat, so I'm excited for that one as well. SQUEEE! okay. Happy days.

=^-^=
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From ANON - akaku on July 01, 2009
omg. this series is just so cute! i cant wait and find out what happens. I rly want 2 no what brought Axel there and what exactly would happen once Sora get feeling back in his legs. *fangirl squeal* i love yaoi
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From on June 27, 2009
really good! im gunna have to read your other stories now...
and zexion always struck me as an uke... dont really know why
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