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Reviews for After Friendship

By : Sione
  • From yeahjesse on February 18, 2008
    Long review was cut-off. >.> Here is the rest:

    Honestly, though, you do a much better job than I when it comes to describing the setting. I like how the chapter was really only one scene--Jak and Dax spending the redhead's first moments of humanity together--and it was satisfying. I want to hear other peoples' reactions, too. What about Tess?! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaahh I'm giving myself suspense ulcers.

    :D GOOD JOB!
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  • From yeahjesse on February 18, 2008
    Hey again, Sione. We updated right around the same time! It was kindof nice because reading this offered a distraction from wondering if my latest chapter will be received well. I had bizarre dreams after cranking that out last night, too. I won't go too heavy into detail, but let's just say that there were Vulcans, an adorable hungry kitten, book stores, coffee shops, a burning town, a boardwalk, a book publisher, some money, and my mom. ._.

    About this chapter! It was great again. More nekkidness! That's the best. I like the way Daxter worried about Jak's arm and the stains on his tunic, and I wonder what he's planning to do in order to "enjoy his new body." On a more candid note, it actually reminded me of a hilarious toothepastefordinner comic that said something like "creepiest outfit ever: just a shirt." But that was an image of a hairy, fat hobo-type guy.

    Actually, if you think about what Daxter would wear to bed as a human, oversized t-shirts sound like a good idea. >.> Or Spiderman pajamas. Or something with power rangers on them.
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  • From yeahjesse on February 13, 2008
    Hey! This is really adventurous and fun. I don't know why I had been putting off reading this for as long as I have. I'm anxious to see what will happen to the two of them when you continue. ;_; Naked Dax... Hooray for Naked Daxter! That's the best kind of Daxter.

    In all seriousness, I think you did a good job starting up the story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2008
    Omg!Please update this a great fic!

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  • From sillyneko345 on January 30, 2008
    Eeep, I didn't realize you had posted it already! I need to be more observant... >_< Anyway. I still like the fight scene a lot. Jak is just so tough and awesome! We luv you, Jak. I really want to see what his reaction will be when he finds out about Daxter's unexpected transformation!
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  • From wanderingaddict on January 19, 2008
    woo, jak and daxter! this looks like it'll be fun, I'd like to read more.
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