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Reviews for Perfect Dark

By : sillyneko345
  • From MasterJak on February 22, 2008
    I love you. Plain and simple. :) My girlfriend read this and at the bit where Dark's purring and being loved on with the scratchy, she turned to me and said, "Hey, he acts just like you! Like a dog or something!" I ADORED this chapter. I think your writing gets better with each one, as impossibly awesome as it is already. Excited for the conclusion! (And chapter 11!)
    PS: ;) Looove the second outtake.
    Creepy stalker fan love, MJ
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  • From dac720 on February 22, 2008
    Yay another great chapter!! Please update soon, I can hardly stand the wait to see when Dax finally gives in to Jaks “cuddly“ affections.

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  • From Sione on February 21, 2008
    Another chapter! *dances around happily*

    I loved it! It feels like I have absolutely nothing intelligent to say right now but I really loved reading this chapter. Dark Jak is still so adorable and poor Daxter is not getting any attention anymore. Well, I guess it’s a bit strange to pet your human friend. But Daxter doesn’t want to sleep in his own bed, he wants to sleep with you, Jak! I hope he remembers everything that happens when he is turned back to normal.

    I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

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  • From yeahjesse on February 21, 2008
    Chapter two! Oh my GOD, this story makes ME feel warm. Dark is so cute. ;_; What a way to end, though.

    The part about Daxter's regrets about transforming seems so on-target. I think it makes a lot of sense that people act differently toward soft and furry animals than they would to that animal's human counterpart. For example, when my sister's cat Alexander was a kitten, he really liked sitting right between her boobs (let's just say she's well-endowed)--and it was adorable! But my sister doesn't greet cute boys by smothering them in between her knockers, so there's a huge difference. I think that Daxter's sentience adds such a dynamic to that loss of contact.

    Anyway... Hot 'n' bothered Dax equals hot 'n' bothered Sej, so MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!1!!eleven :) Thanks for the update.
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  • From dac720 on February 19, 2008
    I always found Dark Jak to be an interesting character if fan fiction because he is written in so many ways, from evil and sadistic to mindless and feral, but I have to say I really enjoy the ”loving protective beast” impression that I get from this one. I’m eagerly looking forward to the next chapter and expecting great things!

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  • From wanderingaddict on February 07, 2008
    hah, this is just adorable! "Rowrr?" "Rowrr!" haha this about the awesomest representation of Jak's dark from I've read yet! I wonder when Dax'll finally catch on...

    eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From yeahjesse on February 04, 2008
    Wow! This is really inventive and fun.

    Having very recently read the ottsel version, I've had a chance to appreciate some of the subtler differences here. I like that Dax is "the safest little rebel," and I have high hopes for this one.

    You've got three fics on here for this fandom. How does THAT feel? I wish I were half as productive. :) As always, you did a good job sucking the reader in and making it real. ;_; The end of it is tormenting. The quickly-dismissed notion that "maybe this is weird." MUST HAVE MOAR!


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  • From SerialKira on February 02, 2008
    I created an account just so that I could review your stories. XD

    This story is so interesting. It's interesting because you could totally pull this off as a 1-chapter with Dax as an ottsel, or the other way around with yaoi. Your explanation of the blast and subsequent events were quick but handled really well. Half of the stuff Dark was doing had me snickering out loud too. XD

    Eagerly awaiting your next update!
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  • From Sione on February 02, 2008
    I think you drowned my need for warm and fluffiness too for awhile. No not really, who I'm kidding, I could never get enough of that! XD

    I'm glad you didn't let Dark Jak get too "dark" if you know what I mean. He should be mean and nasty but not to his dear Dax. He's a bit too creepy in the fics were he practically rapes or almost kills Daxter, Jak wouldn't do that even when affected by dark eco. I think he's still there underneath it all. Although I do love the last dialogues, "We can fix that, you know," lol! Run away, Dax! XD He's so lucky that's not part of the real story!

    "I need a bandage, ya idiot, not you slobberin’ all over me!" Haha, Jak is just trying his best, poor thing is not very appreciated. He’s like a big cute dog in this, love it! :D It's adorable that even though he is Dark Jak you made him all insecure and anxious.

    As you can tell I think it's great so far, I can't wait to read more! And now I feel bad for not being more productive myself. *Goes and writes madly on my story.* Chapter two was being a bitch and I had to re-write some parts but I think I'm back on track again, yay! :)

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  • From MasterJak on February 02, 2008
    I enjoyed the comical aspects of this one. I love Dark and you make him so extra-lovable! Awesome writing skills, as usual!

    Excited for part two. (Loved the outtakes too)

    MJ
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