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Reviews for Suikoden II - Irresistible

By : NinjaGaijin
  • From Streti on February 10, 2008
    Jeanefuck yeah. The writing's good and there are a lot of good ideas. I personally can't see Flik and Odessa's relationship as non-sexual, and the sex would likely have only strengthened their bond. But eh, we'll go with this.

    Gadget's appearance was absolutely great, and the ideas about Jeane combining runes are interesting. Nice naughty scene with Jeane's legs, too. Her appearance at the bar I don't quite agree with, the silence is a bit much. I would more likely see everyone carrying on, trying to hide their interest and the sudden rise of tension, with all eyes covertly or less covertly following Jeane.

    There is also the word boob, or boobs. Lovely word and a fitting description, but also somewhat immature or playful. I don't think it fits Flik's inner dialogue, unless it is to stress a teen-like immaturity with the subject.

    The sex scene is nice of course, though yet again, I feel it needs some more dynamism on Flik's part. The intense final round luckily has that, and I especially like Jeane's attitude to it. I would have liked to see him ram the sloppy member in her mouth for cleaning afterwards though. You could also have elaborated a little more about the semen on her breasts, it doesn't just vanish on its own.

    The end scene with Nina was really great a nice surprise, a really good finish to the story!

    By all means, feel free to add my email address to the cc: line, and terpfen too, for any ideas you want to discuss.
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