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Reviews for Corruption

By : Takika
  • From tehnekostar on November 22, 2009
    I just read the rest and....wow!! All of those different pairings in the last chappie = massive nosebleed for me!! XD

    I hope there's more to this story somewhere because the sexiness is just *amazing* and it's sooooooo hilarious. I want more sexy dumbass Axel too, lol!! ^___^

    Thank you for such a great story!! *glomps j00*


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  • From tehnekostar on November 21, 2009
    Wow this story is awesome and on some *serious* crack!! But that's what makes AU/AR so fun to read!! X3 Kudos to you for writing a paring that is outside of the normal ones. 'Tis quite refreshing. ^^

    And, not only have you written a cool story about my fave game, but you've also referenced my two other great loves in life: JRock and Invader Zim!!

    I just finished Chapter 8 and I will be finishing the rest in the next few days. (It's 6am here and I've got to get up at 9, heh. *massive sweatdrop*)

    Thanks for a great story!! I'll leave another review when I've finished reading it!!


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2008
    Except that the whole XigDem thing is so disgusting, this story is kind of interesting. I might have accepted the Demyx behaviour if it was someone else, but not from Demyx. That's what makes this story so... Less good than it could have been. I mean, Demyx acts like a ho/slut/something... And I feel bad for him, and I don't even like Demyx.

    And I'm really only reading this to find out what will happen with all the other pairings, because they are much more interesting to read about then Xigbar and Demyx. They are fun to read about, but gets way to little attention. More of them instead of annoying smuexing between Xigbar and Demyx. We all know that they are smexing all the time anyway... So un-Demyx...

    Sorry to flame you like this, but I just expressing my opinion. And my wish to read more about everyone else that isn't annoying Xigbar and VERY annoying Demyx. Gee, can't even start to explain how much I don't like this version of Demyx.
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  • From QueenAdreena on April 06, 2008
    This is actually, really r e a l l y good! I was a bit apprehensive at first, because it's au, but so far, I'm really into it (I'm only up to chapter 4, but thought I'd review already). Great description, and nicely lengthed chapters.
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  • From royceclaytonlives on February 29, 2008
    OMG! This is the hottest and coolest story ever! I can't believe noone's reviewed this yet! I really loved reading this! The drama, the sidestories, the smexy smex! The perverted Larxene and Xaldin! It's amazing! You really are talented, and I think you're a wonderful story teller! Please update when you can, I want to read more!

    *hugs and cuddles*
    ~Crys
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