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Reviews for Suikoden II - Old Book Vol. 69

By : NinjaGaijin
  • From SlutWriter on September 08, 2008
    I just want to say that I can't imagine a Suikoden fanfic having a better title than this.

    - FS
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  • From Streti on March 13, 2008
    Well now... surprised to see this so soon. Nice punny title... Definitely good writing as you start developing and detailing the idea. Nice funny idea about Milich writing romance novels, and I liked the detailed descriptions of the girls in the mags. The shortly referenced Jeane scene at the barracks was great too. I still don't agree with the idea of Emilia's total lack of experience, but the theme is handled well.

    The end part, however, is somewhat questionable. First of all, the attack seems to happen too soon. There should be a little more time for the setting change from inside to outside to settle in. Also, it's unclear whether she makes a large round around the yard or something and comes back to the library door, or if she's only just about to walk further.

    Then there's the scene itself, which goes too far along the line of rape. She wasn't fucked, she was raped. Now, while we as the readers can see that some part of her enjoys it due to the confusion of the rune, the mystery rapist doesn't have that advantage. For all intents and purposes, he is raping and abusing her mercilessly. This calls the mystery man's quality of character into serious question. Now, perhaps I'm being too modern or PC here, and you have a stand here about rough sex, or the roles of men and women, or if you meant to write a rape scene, that is your choice of course. However, I think the negative tone of the scene deviates from the setup of the story.
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