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Reviews for Kingdom Heat

By : KokonoMitsubishi23
  • From Jenmoon1 on December 27, 2013
    LOVE IT
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  • From on April 04, 2008
    As Aloneintheopen said, more discription would be good, plus, water isn't a very good lube lol. And, the spacing was good, but could've been better if an extra return would have been made. Sora probably would've been a bit more surprised and/or nervous when Riku came onto him, too. Other than that, it was really good! I don't usually review 'cause I'm lazy, but I really liked this one, and it was hard to believe there aren't that many reviews! P.S. Don't listen to that MeanMo freak, 'cause they just suck! (in a bad way)
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  • From Momomo on March 26, 2008
    Did you rip this off from a Japanese doujinshi? Because it was certainly rushed and poorly thought-out like one.
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  • From AloneintheOpen on March 25, 2008
    You have great potential. I suggest thinking about lengthening the scene because usually the more description you have, the better it is.
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  • From OrochiGreel on March 25, 2008
    that was great! do more yaoi and lemons
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