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Reviews for Fire Emblem: Sacaen Nights

By : OmegaX
  • From ANON - Sven Dular on December 28, 2009
    I like this story...How about Lyn/Isadora or Lyn/Serra...or Lyn/Both and Situation....Punishing Serra and forcing Isadora to rape her, then she rapes them both.
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  • From WotanAnubis on October 29, 2009
    Hmm... making Lyn more depraved out of spite or corruption wouldn't work for me (but, then again, rape doesn't work for me, so I'm clearly not part of the target audience for this fic). If you go that route, you might as well switch to writing about Sonia or Petrine, since it'd at least be somewhat in character for them.

    However, Lyn being depraved since it was part of her all along and merely locked away by her sense of honour and kindness would be a lot more interesting. Of course, the side-effects of the magical mishap would need to be erased first, but since there are plenty of competent mages throughout the three games, that shouldn't be too much trouble.
    Then you might need to spend some time with Lyn coming to terms with her... darker side in combination with her tendency towards honour and kindness (possibly... 'helped'... by the newly sexually liberated, but still basically noble, Fiora) and crawling through the dust for Florina and Eirika in an effort to make up for what she'd done to them.
    And after that you could continue with the happier kind of depravity I prefer. ;)

    Or, you could simply continue with magically altered not-really!Lyn continuing to rape everyone she meets. But since magically altered Lyn isn't really Lyn, I don't see why I should care.
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  • From RisingPhoenix on October 04, 2009
    If you're going a more depraved route, you could have Lyn getting "revenge" on Nino, or alternatively, "thanking" her for leading to this change.
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  • From ANON - Lovin' It on October 04, 2009
    I bit extra depraved-ness won't hurt....so long as you update soon!
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  • From karlminion on October 04, 2009
    I say... futa. Futa is always grand.
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  • From AlkeniSynair on October 04, 2009
    Well, I would like to see the chapter with Farina be consensual(sp?) right from the start, although I don't mind Lyn being her current level of domineering bitch.

    I'd like to see Lyn fucking Serra next.
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  • From raefactor on March 22, 2009
    Thanks for the review! I'm actually not intending to continue the storyline exactly... but I have a future chapter somewhere up ahead in which Alucard and Seras catch wind of the new UK laws banning pornography that depicts bestiality, sex with a corpse, or extremely violent and/or dangerous sexual acts... so of course they have to go make a last hurrah before it goes through and make a video with as many soon-to-be-illegal things as possible! XD I'm hoping to drag Walter into it too-- you know he can be sadistic when he wants to be! I expect to have lots of pain and blood and wires and maybe even some shooting (and not just from THAT kind of gun, haha). But yes, I totally love the concept of Alucard grooming Seras to be addicted to pain and pleasure. I don't really see it working any other way.
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  • From ThePairingGuy on January 27, 2009
    I figure it's about time I reviewed your fic since you've reviewed mine, though I'm afraid I don't know any of the Fire Emblem games and I'm not into Yuri.

    Anyway, I'm not sure what you're doing with this. So far it's just set up for the sex scenes, but judging by your profile where you say you're not into Yuri and by your reviews, I wouldn't expect that kind of PWP from you. To be honest, it's very repetitive so far. I don't mean the sex scenes, because you do good variety in those, with different levels of consent and different approaches and attitudes. It's just that nothing different is happening with the plot in each chapter, which is fine if that's the sort of fic you're trying to write, but if not, you need to start working in the developments in the plot.

    Regardless of the plot, though, your writing is really very good. You get right to the point of things without rushing them, especially the clever way you worked in the background for the story in the first scene. Your style is quite engaging to read, too, it's hard to describe why. Lym has an intense loathsomeness that you bring out in a very subtle manner.

    There are a few things you might want to correct. The paragraph "One of the female guards does so, and the two head..." was very confusing to me. You need to break up a couple paragraphs, too, especially the one where Lym rapes Eirkia and the one beginning chapter 3. Finally, in both of chapters 1 and 2 you mention "the woman's barricks(chapter 1 and 2)". What woman? Or did you mean "the women's barracks"?

    Like I said, I really enjoy your writing, and though I'm not into this particular story, I'll definitely check out either another chapter or a new story if you come out with one.
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  • From Savaial on November 25, 2008
    Wooo! Lyn sure is a horny, violent thing! I don't know this genre, but I enjoyed the glimpse you gave me in this fic. It isn't often I read a fem-dom, and I did appreciate it. I'm curious as to Lyn's relationship with Mark. He must like to hear of her exploits, which is kinky. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on October 01, 2008
    Aargh...too angry, in chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on October 01, 2008
    Wonderful. I've always liked the "botched spell" idea for crossovers, and Nino's ineptitude is just as good an excuse for it as Ewan's curiosity. I usually would have it coming from the Magvel end, with Ewan's experimentation causing some unexpected effects. This works too. And it's good. And you're damn right about Eirika's skirt.
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  • From Lubegirl88 on May 19, 2008
    I think that you can go into a bit more detail with those scenes. They seemed rushed to me. Either way I like the way it's headed :)
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  • From RisingPhoenix on April 07, 2008
    I like where this is going and look forward to it fully. My only comment would be that perhaps it would be easier to read if you used smaller paragraphs.

    Keep up the good work!
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