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Reviews for Resident Evil EX: Zero

By : omega13

From ninesenshi on March 15, 2010
Well, I have been enjoying this story. Good job with the leeches, creatively done. Hope to see more from you.
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From maiafay376 on March 14, 2010
How do I say this? This is a guilty pleasure, one not good for you in the slightest...like that seven layer chocolate cake you know you really don't need, but you eat it anyway. You have an abundance of purple prose, but I'm not going to slam you for it. Somehow, it fits the context; the language provides a gooey, rich passion to indulge in.

Besides, I have a fetish with tentacles.

M
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From BeefJerkyYo on December 06, 2009
This is a fantastic story that I keep coming back and reading again and again. You've got a really great writing style and I'd love to see more in the future.
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From Tdean987 on June 18, 2009
Wow thats amazing how you detail not only the (humhumm)"acts" and all the organism descriptions without getting bogged down in the more mundane uninteresting points that might push someone away a story like this. I do like the progressing shifting of her state of mind thanks to the new hormones spreading through her.

I really respect you for the wonderful job you did on chapter 3 with the leaches. That seems like it would have been a near impossible "write" just to get the animal reactions right.

You seam to have a real gift with words that most of us can't even truly appreciate.

I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm gushing, but your really doing an incredible job.
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From LadyAlexiel on April 22, 2009
This story is soo HOT! I really hope you write more!
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From ANON - Kevin on November 27, 2008
i was wondering when and/or if you're gonna continue this fan fiction.its really great(and hot)story and im interested in what could happen next since its still taking place within the first part of the game.plz continue!?
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From KiandraVaniel420 on October 30, 2008
I've read the entire piece. ^_^;;; Yes I read rather fast... Anywho...

I'm impressed you idea of the toxin, pheremone and such for the changes. It's great! Much better than the monsters just getting a sudden urge, there is a reason to alter the otherwise blood-thirsty beasts. I'm also intrigued you chose the rookie rather than a more recognizable member of the series, yet it's more entertaining to see her instead and how she with the inexperience takes such changes. It shows incredible planning... actually.

So far my favorite moment was and will be the leech-element. For not using something more phallic/elongated and actually far more alien has a bit of skill to pull off. When you see these kinds of monster/human love-incidents they center on the creatures that are more plausible. Something we commonly see such as the Cerebrus, Licker and Hunter variety. Yet when you chose to use this, and not that of a more common creature, that gives the sense your up to more challenges than others. Aswell the eroticism with the mouthful motions, pulsating pores and so much more you described did give a LOT of fun elements. That helped keep it from becoming surreal which for the topic is a great feat.

The Cerebrus now comes to mind. I was pleased to say that your use of its more vicious side, to affirm her fears of what's happening I'd enjoyed. As a reader, it's nice to have affirmation of what's happening to the character. To ground the idea, why the character is willing to not just run or scream. She's in a situation otherwise out of her control. So although she on some levels refuses to except her violation and seduction, she is innevitably reminded of her powerlessness.

I'm not happy with the tentacle chapter... I can't explain why though. It's not that it was not enjoyable to read, it was simply the use of the creature. Being an original it could be my lack to fully grasp it, since up till then I used my game-savie to pull off most images (NOT to say your imagery wasn't impressive!). Also I've got minor hangups with her reaction to some of the tentacle violations. Perhaps I'm trying to expect too much from something so less-involved. lol.

Ooh and the zombie chapter was rather thrilling. I'll add that too. ^^

I'm going to say... it's been a far better read than some. I'm interested since you are doing Resident Evil Zero, if it will have (as it has had the Marcus Leech) Will there be a Lurker scene (large toads) Cause as I mentioned before, I had a fit with the idea of a toad mating. *smirk* Seeing as they are less movement based, it's difficult for me to understand the concept other than it sitting on my character and therefore dumping her with seed. It's interesting but not as much fun to describe. If I read a chapter with your style though, it would offer something to use. Perhaps even to emmulate?

A thing I hate to admit in wishing to see is the Hunter. I once thought of a story revolving a Hunter and young teenage girl, which was silly. *shrugs* It was more romantic however and rather unbelievable so I scratched it. I'm interested in seeing how you if you so choose to use them, would have a Hunter/s in a mating scene.

Well thank you for an enjoyable read. I hope to see more of it. ^^
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From KiandraVaniel420 on October 30, 2008
X3 I'm loving this piece! I just skimmed... cause I wanted to see what all you got planned out. Yet I'll now read thru more intently. It's a really great piece and YOU are SOOOOO detailed! *laughs* I like to think I'm pretty good...

Hey... I got a fic which I have had some issues with. If'n you can, maybe a few ideas? I was thinking of my main charrie (a self-charrie for my RP site) being tagged by a large Devil-Toad in the next chapter. Sadly, I'm uncertain if it's... a good idea. XD

Again I wuv the piece. X3 Congrats!!!
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From Halamee2559 on October 13, 2008
Damn! I'll be frank when I say that, as far as tent' goes, that's the best I've seen in like... ever? LOL!

But I'm curious; will Rebecca be going through any physical changes because of the leech bite from before? And whn I say physical changes, I don't mean trans-type stuff, but like breast enlargement, longer, more wilder hair... that type of thing.

^_^
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From on July 23, 2008
In all honesty, this story is going to be epic for the future of erotic Resident evil stories. Not only have you given a deviously twisted sexual story, but you have given description and depth beyond that. You give ground to the story which makes it readible for both categories of people who enjoy erotica and literature. I have very much enjoyed the chapters so far and look forward to the next installment. I of course would love to see more mindless smutt with the monsters, as well with Billy. I am a huge Billy Coen fan, what can you expect.

I do hope you decide to do a scene with the young marcus and some tenticle action. And of course who could forget the Albert Wesker and his grunts.

What ever you decide to do, I am sure it will be magnificent.

Good lucky and happy writting.
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From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2008
finally this story has returned.....this was a well made chapter and i won't lie to you tentacle scenes usually bore me but you somehow pulled it off easily...unfortunately i can't be of much help i have never played RE0 and therefore dont really know any other creatures besides the traditional zombie types lickers tyrants etc from the other installments.....however i do know one thing you shouldnt include and that is an **encounter** between rebecca and billy its too obvious and your story is far from that its actually orignal...i guess it would be interesting to see rebecca being impregnated somehow but hey if you feel uncomfortable writing such a situation its alright im just trying to throw out some possibilities pregnancy situations arent my type of thing but it would be interesting to see it happen to rebbecca chambers of the RE series....and hurry with the next chapter!!
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From ANON - Andrew J Talon on June 30, 2008
I think you've covered your bases in regards to making Jill's reactions to these experiences plausible and realistic, and it was a clever idea. This is a very different but well written story and I look forward to more.
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From on June 29, 2008
That was so worth the wait.
That was amazing
Need MOAR!
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From ANON - James on June 28, 2008
Awesomely sick story dude. But you can't just leave Billy out on all the action. Making Becca intimate with almost every zombie, leech monster etc she encounters and then pull a "hai bye" to the only other male human with her is...unfair and repetitively boring.
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From ANON - Matt on June 08, 2008
1: Are you looking for words for 'Tent', or simply long, thin, objects? If thats the case: Whip, ropey, vine, etc.

2: Yeah, spiders creep the hell outta me.

3: I think you should go for the dedication. I myself have only played RE4, so I cant really comment on therest of your questions.

Roll On.
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