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Reviews for Resident Evil EX: Zero

By : omega13
  • From ANON - Umm on July 14, 2012
    Many of the descriptions are way too wordy and unnecessary. It almost ruined it for me to be honest.

    It's too bad this won't ever be finished. Probably because the author got tired of thinking up 5 adjectives for every other sentence.
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  • From ANON - Raif on October 30, 2011
    Just wanted to sat that I hope you continue this story as it was one of my favourites. And hopefully you will put the older chapters back up as I really enjoyed them too. Anyway keep up the good work and hopefully there will be an update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Nikki on July 14, 2011
    Out of all te resident evil stories on aft this Is by far my favorite. The plot the monster you do it so well I look foreword to seeing on how you are going to redo this story good luck eit it
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  • From AndrewJoshuaTalon on March 29, 2011
    Great to see the revised version going back up, but I miss the older version as well. Is there somewhere to see them while you're uploading these? Which are good too but I like both.
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  • From Danyealle on February 11, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From ANON - Mike on January 12, 2011
    The revision really tells the story better, I'm getting a much clearer setting in mind as opposed to the old one where I was, admittedly, a little in the dark at times. Looking forward to the future chapters!
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  • From ANON - cardan on January 11, 2011
    hey i just was wondering if you are still working on this cause i read it before you started revising and it was pretty good, and i honestly like the fact that you have a plot in this instead of just the usual straight forward story, you know?
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  • From BeefJerkyYo on January 04, 2011
    Sweet, I can't wait to read the rewrites.
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  • From tscecest on January 02, 2011
    There was a lot of purple prose in that first chapter. The scenes were easy to read, but it felt like there was quite a bit of superfluous description, especially in the sex scene.

    Other than that, though, I have no objections to your story thus far.
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  • From ANON - Sean on September 22, 2010
    Well done, very well done overall. You must proofread the hell out of these things before you put them up. I'm an English grad and normally I catch the odd error reading through stories like this. Kinda like my nails on a chalk board. Here? Nothing. Good flow, well written, and entertaining as all hell. In terms of suggestions or preferences for the next chapter, for me that will depend on the number of zombies present. If there's only two, then at some point I'd like to see Rebecca stuck between them, like a medic on a spit so to speak. One fucking her from behind (hole optional), and her blowing the other one. If there's three, well, three zombies, three holes seems like good math to me, and the makings for a good old triple team. Another possibility is her on her back, sucking one, fucking the other and maybe masturbating or tit fucking the third? But all this is assuming they jump her at the same time. You did say mutants don't play nice together so we'll see.

    On another note, I just wanted to say thank you for allowing and encouraging reader reviews. Some authors get offended or angry when others point out errors. The fact that you are inviting our critiques means you want to improve and that you care what your readers think. Thanks for that. Great work so far and keep it up. Can't wait till you get to Jill Valentine. That's gonna be hot. ...and I've gotta ask, any guesses on a timeframe for the next chapter? Sorry, just had to. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - AndrewJTalon on September 12, 2010
    However, as a suggestion for the next three zombies, all I can say is: Gangbang, with bukkake action. Let Rebecca get her brains humped out and then rest a while longer. You could also demonstrate some teamwork between the zombies indicating that for poon, some of their higher brain functions are still intact. Plus, they are on a train-Might try some stuff you see in the chikan genre of hentai.
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  • From ANON - AndrewJTalon on September 12, 2010
    I really don't blame you for skipping the scorpion sex, that would have freaked the fuck out of me too. The Eliminator seems a likely candidate for another lemon but that's not until you reach the Umbrella training facility. The Web Spinners... Yeah, that's creepy. On the other hand, there is a possible way to use them without sex being involved-Have the Web Spinners capture Rebecca, strip her, tie her up in webbing with her weapons close enough for her to use on them, but before she can get out zombies come along and bang her once again.
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  • From ANON - onehornydude on May 20, 2010
    MOAAAAAR!

    Brilliant, no complaints, thanks for it.
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  • From BeefJerkyYo on April 27, 2010
    Wow, you really have a way with words. I don't even have any suggestions on how to improve, just keep up the good work. I didn't come across anything too confusing, but then again, I was so drawn in to the story that I my mind glossed over the little bumps.

    And don't worry about begging for reviews, if anyone deserves feedback, it's you. I'm looking forward to more, especially what you'll do with the scorpion, since that was one of the more memorable parts of the game.
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  • From ninesenshi on March 17, 2010
    Chap 4 was good. Sexy and well described. I don't really need all the explanations at the end. Keep writing.
    SailorNemesis
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